MAFIA X MAFIA

By: Bts_forlife21

Reviewed by: -YEEHOBI-

Tittle: 3/5
it isnt very attracting and doesn't quite create curiousity.

Cover: 4/5
       Its cool.

Blurb: 2/5
       It clearly states the reason why the reader (Y/N) has a mysterious and cold personality. there is a very tiny bit of redundancy.

First Impression: 12/20
  I wasn't exactly excited to read the book because of the title (isn't very catchy).

Plot: 5/20
      The story has been applied for 'min yoongi' category yet there aren't much interactions between the main characters. 'Y/N' is much, much more involved with supporting characters.

Flow: 3/10
      Not much rushed, but understanding which speaker said which dialogue was very hard; even more confusing because of switching from saying in quotes to the texting format. The scene was hard to comprehend as well.

Emotions: 5/10
  The author needs to improve details. I could not feel the emotions described in the book.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 4/10
      There are many grammatical errors & a few typos. Misuse of homophonic words. Read the chapter for a few times before you publish it. Overuse of punctuations ('!!!!', '?!?!'). Some sentences lack the proper punctuations as well. Vocabulary isn't very great, usage of rarer words would help in enhancing the writing.

Character Development: 6.5/10
       It is messy, hard to understand what the characters are trying to make the readers feel.

Overall: 2/5

Total: 46.5/100

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by Mochi_Panda_0317

Judged by: NimishaTrivedi

Title: its quirky and it indirectly tells everything about the story.
4/5

Cover: its good but I think it'd be better if some more editing will be done.
3/5

Blurb: blurb is so good, you define the story well.
4/5

First impression: Didn't see anything special but it's written with skills.
17/20

Plot: I love the plot.
19/20

Flow: didn't see anything wrong with the flow and I think it's going good.
9/10

Emotions: The emotions are expressed in a good way.
8/10

Grammar and Vocabulary: The writting seems perfect to me.
9/10

Character Development: I can say that, characters and their personalities are great.
4/5

Total: 88/100

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Mystic Silence by

CaptainCork

Judge: NimishaTrivedi

Title: its distinctive and fits the story very well.
4/5

Cover: its virtuous and the editing is good.
3/5

Blurb: blurb is so good.
4/5

First impression: Its written with skills.
17/20

Plot: its something new and fresh.
18/20

Flow: there's nothing wrong with the flow.
9/10

Emotions: Emotions are expressed adequately.
8/10

Grammar and Vocabulary: The way everything is written, is perfect.
9/10

Character Development: The way a character's personality is changing is amazing.
4/5

85/100

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Book: Yoongbot

By: KimGits

Judge : September_Jeon

Title: 5/5
Amazing, the title is unique and attractive.

Cover: 5/5
It is catchy and appropriate for the book

Description: 4/5
It is great, but can be better, yet the blurb is unique.

First Impression: 17/20
The start done by the author is great, they don't loose the interest of the readers.

Plot: 18/20
The plot is definitely uncommon, and catchy.

Emotions: 17/20
The description of the emotion is well pictured but, need a little effort to make it better.

Grammar: 9.5/10
I find no problem in this aspect.

Characters: 8/10
The characters definitely mould in a positive side, at the constant pace. The characters are interesting too.

Overall: 4.5/5

it is really a good book, if you are looking for dra plus humor, it is an amazing combination.
Total: 88/100
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NOT YOUR OPPA -

@zd-ey_

Judge: -YEEHOBI-

Tittle: 2/5
It isn't very catchy and attractive,it won't attract people to read the book..it just doesn't make me curious to read it with great pleasure,interest and enjoyment, and to me "Not Your Oppa" is a bit cringey.

Cover: 2/5
Let's start here,
Not everything looks good with black and white
It isn't eye-catching,isn't done very well,looks like it was done in a hurry,usage of filters and different filter can make it a bit beautiful and good looking,don't put too much text it doesn't look good.

Blurb: 2/5
First Impression: 5/20

The cover isn't nice,the chapter,how it starts isn't so good
The title and the description sounded cliché

Plot: 15/20
To me the plot was "eh" I didn't enjoy it., I gave it 15 cause,I don't read much books,but my friends liked it so yah.

Flow: 6/10
Good enough,grammar could be changed.

Emotions: 5/10
More words required

Grammar & Vocabulary: 6/10
Use rare or not so much used words, grammatical errors

Character Development: 5/10
I don't like the characters that y/n and yoongi portrays

Overall: 3/5
Total: 51/100

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TRAIN TO DAEGU -

Mrs_Namnam

Judge: -YEEHOBI-

Tittle: 2/5
It isn't very catchy and attractive,it won't attract people to read the book..it just doesn't make me curious to read it with great pleasure,interest and enjoyment.

Cover: 1.5/5
It isn't eye-catching,isn't done very well,looks like it was done in a hurry,usage of filters and different filter can make it a bit beautiful and good looking.

Blurb: 2/5
The title and the description sounded cliché.

First Impression: 5/20
The cover isn't nice,the chapter,how it starts isn't so good

Plot: 11/20
Good plot,but a bit over used.

Flow: 6/10
Good enough,grammar could be changed

Emotions: 5/10
More words required

Grammar & Vocabulary: 6/10
Use rare or not so much used words.

Character Development: 8.5/10
I like how it's done,how yn and yoongi gets together, especially Y/n's flashbacks.

Overall: 4/5
Total: 47/100

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