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As we promised to give a review to all the participants after the announcement of results so here we are...

Going to announce the review of your stories to help you all......

Let's start.....

Book: Sheltered Idol

Author: just-taesing

Title:3/5

The title is appropriate, but it feels like it is a sad story about the main lead and his difficulties, it doesn't seem like a romantic one.

Cover: 2/5

The is simple, not much effort has been given. It doesn't describes the story and its theme to.

Blurb: 2/5

It is short and less descriptive to form an opinion about the story. It needs to be attractive and catchy.

First Impression: 15/20

It was fine, it didn't differentiate the chapter from other stories. The beginning should be lovely-dovey.

Plot: 15/20

The lot is common in all idolAU but the situations you have created within are good, yet I think there should have been more problems erupting as your story goes.

Flow: 10/10

The flow is good and it keeps the reader intact with your text.

Emotions: 2/10

This section is poor, the characters themselves don't know how they feel. At least being the narrator you should clearly specify how does your lead roles think and express.

Grammar and vocabulary: 6/10

The grammar is good, I found no mistakes but the vocabulary needs to be improved. Be more expressive and descriptive while writing.

Character Development: 4/10

There was no significant growth in the characters. The people in the story did face problems and overcome them, but no improvement in their act.

Overall: 3/5

Review:The content is good but needs to be more descriptive and elegant. Right from the title to the blurb make the text catchy a little secretive. Though it is a cliche but add some tips to the characters that make them different from others. Work on your text to make it more alluring and romantic so that the characters and the emotions evolve with it.

Total: 62/100

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Book: Perfect in Imperfections

Author: BlazePR5

Title: 4/5

The title is suitable for plot and explains a part of story itself.

Cover: 3/5

The cover is fit for the book, but to many elements in it is causing a distraction from the written title.

Blurb: 3/5

The length of the blurb is ok. But the main plot is not visible. They are beating around the bush and the blurb doesn't support the main idea of the story.

First Impression: 16/20

The story is really good but only if you read it to end the the first chapter reduced my interest. Since, most of it only talk about depression and suffering. The start is dull not even a hint of happiness can be found to show some positivity. The text make you self-conscious which is a draw back.

Plot: 17/20

The plot is different, and unique. But it contains problems adding to more mourning of the characters than they already are. The author has continuously switched the story between present and past. Carrying two plots along the same track and they have handled it nicely.

Flow: 8/10

The flow is good enough, there is an upgrade in time and situation in every present chapter. The other chapters with past and mails are somewhere holding back the main line, but since in contains importance, it is fine. They're beautiful.

Emotions: 8/10

The emotions of every main lead is expressed to very well. The sadness is the dominating feeling in the book which does make me sad but dull and conscious. At the same time. No other happy feeling could be traced in the story. They should add more types of emotions.

Character: 6/10

There is no development in the personality. Even if there is, it just only makes them dull and sad. The people in the book are mostly depressed, confused or irritated. There is no positive change. But the strong will and their personality are enough to judge.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 10/10

Their writing style is amazing. They have a sea of words in their head and puts them wonderfully into a sentence. Their text is literally awesome.

Overall: 5/5

The poems and prose have added to the beauty of the story and the text will keep you awestruck. It can make you cry.

Total: 80/100

Review: The story is good, something not common in the world of fanfiction, but the main element that puts you down is the depression. There is sadness all around, though the poems and prose in between has left me utterly speechless, but a ideal fanfiction should portray all the emotions, work all gathering them all.

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Book: I Need You

Author: SL-BTSILLION

Title: 4/5

The title fits well with the plot, but is too common for the readers to notice the uniqueness in the story.

Cover: 3/5

It suits the story and has all the basic requirements needed. But I personally recommend that they should have added both the main male characters. Also because of the dull filter it doesn't catches your eyes so much as compared to others

Blurb: 4/5

It's length is perfect and describes well. The blurb is interesting to read the story. But the description of the characters after reading makes me want to it contradict it.

First Impression: 14/20

It makes me want to read more but the way the author put up the basic information, decreases my interest because of the number of characters. Main female lead has a plot hole within the 1st chapter itself, and the text seems mostly useless until I came to the end.

Plot: 16/20

The plot is unique and interesting. It contains a lots of mysteries and the connection given are good. But again the number of characters is making me forget that who did what to whom and why.

Flow: 3/10

The flow is bad. The story doesn't have a consistent pace to proceed. At the beginning it is very very slow, such that not all of the main characters are introduced till the 4th chapter and after that it suddenly picks up pace for a few chapters before going slow again. The reason is useless text, they needs to do heavy editing.

Emotions: 4/10

The character are changing their emotions like clothes. Even if they are mentally stable or not most of them are bipolar. The author hasn't described the emotions very well, which includes, reason and a little background. Many characters are feeling or doing things they aren't to do according to their personality.

Grammar: 8/10

The grammar is very good. There were some typing mistakes, but they're negligible. The vocabulary is fine, but needs to be descriptive for the kind of plot they have chosen and I could find a single word 'venom' being used a lot of times.

Characters : 6/10

There is growth in not all but most of the main leads. Still, they are changing their behavior which was carried out by them since years all of a sudden. There should be a slow down and proper reasons with time. Again, too many characters to keep up.

Overall: 2/5

Review: The story is really good and has lots of secrets locked in to make it thrilling. But needs heavy omission of text. They needs to stick to the personality of every character separately and some paragraphs in between are taking away the essence of the built story.

Total 62/100

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Book - Straight

Author - akr_2204

Title- 3/5

The problem about the title is it don't show what the story is about. You won't be able to understand just reading the title until you read the blurb. The title relates with the story.

Cover- 3/5

It wouldn't not say it's bad but it's not good too. It looks like you just wrote texts in the images.

Blurb- 5/5

It's amazing. The writing, the lines you choose to be a part of blurb it's perfect.

First impression - 12/20

The opening of the chapter wasn't that good as i expected but as the story goes on it becomes interesting.

Plot - 18/20

I really enjoyed the plot a lot and mainly when he doesn't know what to say and he blurted out junkook is gay. I really enjoyed that part the most. I feel like you are telling a situation, It doesn't feel like it was written from imagination.

Flow - 10/10

The timing and the part which should be in the following chapters are perfect.

Emotions - 8/10

The Characters are really good at showing their emotions but sometimes it's hard to understand what the Characters are thinking.

Grammar and vocabulary- 10/10

I see no problems in it!

Character development - 4/10

I literally know like nothing about the Characters. There was no introduction about characters so i didn't get to know anything about the characters.

Overall - 3/5

It needs improvement. Just with a little improvement it can be much better.

Total - 76/100

Hope you all are satisfied with the reviews... and will work on your weak points, good luck...

See you soon......