JEON JUNGKOOK CATEGORY RESULT
Hey........ guys !! How you all are doing ??
Naveena this side....
So today we are going to announce the results of our
JEON JUNGKOOK CATEGORY
How many of you are waiting and excited hmm ??
But before I announced results... just one thing I want to make sure is that
Please don't feel down because of our judgements, you all are amazing, and me and Rabi we both want to say, that you all are writers, never let yourself down because of anything.... okay guys ??
So let's announce the results as we already knew that we have promised to give a short review to all the participants, whether they win or not... so after the announcement of all the categories result we will upload different chapters carrying the reviews of other participant's books.......
So let's don't waste more time......
And yes guys if you are not okay with judges judgment then please don't spam the Judges notification you can take help from the good reviews, and can ignore from which you are not comfortable......
DRUM ROLLS.....
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The girl of my dreams
Written by KimGits
Title - 3/5
I didn't see anything special in it but it's simple and define the story nicely.
Cover - 2/5
it doesn't matches with the story. Could be much better.
Blurb - 4/5
I kinda like it. The vocabulary used in it is really impressive. I really like it.
First impression - 19/20
The starting of the story is as i expected but I really didn't imagine it to be like that. It indeed was different. I thought it would be a fairy tale but it really impressed me.
Plot - 18/20
To be honest, first when I saw the chapters length, I thought they might be boring but when I started reading, even the long chapters felt like short. Great story writting, it is really good.
Flow - 8/10
I don't see anything wrong with it but sometimes it goes a little slower. You can maintain it in much better way, sometime I felt like skipping some chapters as the flow was really slow.
Emotions - 10/10
I swear that's what happens to me everyday in real life. The whole story is full of emotions especially when jungkook saw the girl, butterflies ran on my stomach too, you have presented it so beautifully.
Grammar and vocabulary - 10/10
It really is well detailed and there's no grammatical mistakes.
Character development - 9/10
They are really good at showing their personalities. I can feel it from here.
Overall - 4/5
I love this story. It really is a great imagination based fanfic.
Total - 87/100
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Heartless JJk
Written by BTSsumuJK
Title - 4/5
It was simple but It actually shows what the story is about and I like that about it.
Cover - 4/5
I like the colors you put and it describes the story too but the title looks blended making it hard to read.
Blurb - 4/5
I love the blurb especially when you put curiosity in it but it would be much better if you write it more clearly.
First impression - 15/20
I didn't see anything different. It was like how most people start with which don't make it different than other stories. But still it deserves good mark.
Plot - 19/20
I don't even understand what to say. When I opened your book it just get interesting and interesting making it hard to stop. i think the part about the broken glass and scarlet kicking Y/N it took me time to understood. It would be great if you could write some scenes more clearly.
Flow - 8/10
I think the story is going little fast.
Emotions - 9/10
The characters are really good at showing their emotions but if it would have been more detailed it would be great.
Grammar and vocabulary - 8/10
I see no mistakes in grammar but your vocabulary needs to be a little improved.
Character development - 8/10
Every character is going good but about jungkook, he changed his personality way too fast.
Overall - 4/5
It indeed is a great story but you need to work on it more.
Total - 83/100
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Your eyes tell
Written by 123hikibakas
Title- 3/5
It matches the theme and plot but lacks a little creativity.
Cover - 4/5
I really love the cover. The colours which were used shows some interesting stuff which will attract more readers. But if the font was a little large then it will look good.
Blurb - 3/5
The lines you used. I love it. Try to write it in such a way that it will be more descriptive.
First impression - 19/20
The starting was really like how we see in a drama which is full of mystery and suspense. The starting was a flashback which i really appreciate you started with it so people can get some idea about your main character. If you will be able to show it more clearly, this story will be famous soon.
Plot - 14/20
About the plot, it feels like I am watching a movie but it really needs editing to get polished.
Flow - 10/10
It really is going with a proper flow and the amount you are putting in each chapter it's perfect.
Emotions - 10/10
I am really not an easy-going but I really had to give you full marks. Within the 3 chapters, i have known the main character well.
Grammar and vocabulary - 8/10
There were no grammatical errors except for very little mistakes but you will get expert in vocabulary as much you will practice because I can see you have got some natural talent.
Character development - 7/10
You need to focus a little more on the conversation going on. You should focus on character behavior and change them as the story goes on.
Overall - 4/5
Overall, I love it, just a little bit editing and the story will rock. Glad I read it first. keep it up!
Total - 82/100
CONGRATULATIONS TO OUR WINNERS...
And those who didn't win, please don't feel down you all are great..... just need more improvement....
Thank you for participating and be with us. Hope you all will stay with us in future . . .
We will dm the prizes to our WINNERS with in 3 days.....
Hope to see you all again soon...
Till then good bye take care...
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