J-HOPE CATEGORY RESULTS
Hey........ guys !! How you all are doing ??
Rabi this side....
So today we are going to announce the results of our
J-HOPE category
How many of you are waiting and excited hmm ??
But before I announced results... just one thing I want to make sure is that
Please don't feel down because of our judgements, you all are amazing, and me and Rabi we both want to say, that you all are writers, never let yourself down because of anything.... okay guys ??
So let's announce the results as we already knew that we have promised to give a short review to all the participants, whether they win or not... so after the announcement of all the categories result we will upload different chapters carrying the reviews of other participant's books.......
So let's don't waste more time......
And yes guys if you are not okay with judges judgment then please don't spam the Judges notification you can take help from the good reviews, and can ignore from which you are not comfortable......
DRUM ROLLS.....
THE FIRST PLACE GOES TO
Intricate Love
Judge: JDXOT7
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First Impression: 20/20
Plot: 20/20
Flow: 10/10
Emotions: 9/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Character development: 9.5/10
Overall: 3/5
Total Marks: 95/100
Review:
♢It was great but about the title I have to search for the meaning of intricate, if it had already it's meaning written at the start of the book/story it would have been easy. ♢And the cover i think it's a little bit over ♢like the word Intricate it means difficult and if we add love with intricate it means difficult love and like the cover it should include as much as sad scenes or emotions but it doesn't.
♢and character development it was good but still.
♢Overall it was nice but it needs a little more exciting drama despite that it was awesome.
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Cherophobic her
By: kpopcharmseu
Judge: JDXOT7
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 3.5/5
First Impression: 19/20
Plot: 19/20
Flow: 10/10
Emotions: 9.5/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Character development: 9/10
Overall: 4/5
Total Marks: 92.5/100
Review:
♢The title was great and it had a match with the story plot.
♢The cover was also great but it doesn't totally suits the plot.
♢It is explained well. It's not too short and also not too long. Yes it gives a brief look at the book. Yes it makes me exited to read it
♢First impression was really great it also made me to read further
♢It makes me excited and curious at the same time.
♢The flow was also great
♢The book/story was full of emotions.
♢There was only 2 or 3 mistakes not more than that
♢The characters were like going up and down.
♢It was great overall but was still ongoing
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OK, now we have two winners at the 3rd place. Scroll down to know.
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Wishing on a star
Judge: JDXOT7
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: 3.5/5
First Impression: 18/20
Plot: 20/20
Flow: 10/10
Emotions: 9/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Character development: 9/10
Overall: 4/5
Total Marks: 91/100
Review:
♢The title it doesn't matches totally but still it was great and eye catching.
♢About the cover. Yes it's eye catching and yes it suits the plot but a little.
♢Blurb it is well explained but it is too short.
♢First impression was great and it also made me to read further but after some chapters I paused but again I started it.
♢The plot was great, like I am speechless
♢The flow was awesome.
♢There were some emotions but still I think it lacks some of it.
♢No mistakes was seen.
♢There was a little change but the characters were the same as before.
♢Overall it was great but the blurb I think needs to be a bit long.
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Tomorrow
By: AgustDs_Shadow
Judge: btsachu
Title: 5/5
The title was really an appropriate one,really views the story.
Cover 4/5
You could have added a little bit of editing as the exiting one is not enough eye catching.
Blurb 5/5
The description was good but a bit long.
Plot 20/20
What can I say,it was really perfect. I don't have any words to say how good the plot is,excellent work.
First impression 20/20
I don't know what to say but the way you have written the first chapter is really perfect and eye catching.
Flow 10/10
Perfect,that's all.
Emotions 6.5/10
Even though the chaptes were entertaining, I didn't felt the emotions to the point where I laughed or cried.
Character development 10/10
Excellent work. The character development was quite surprising. I really like it.
Grammar /vocals 5.5/10
I reduced the marks because of not using proper tense forms and punctuations. For example in chapter 2 it's 'I stood up' not 'I stand up'.
Overall 4/5
If you like adventurous stories this one is a good pick. Good work.
Total: 91/100
Congratulations to all of our winners.
Those who didn't win, don't be sad or heartbroken. Your works need a bit improvement. Hope we will see each other again in near future.
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