BTS SHIPS RESULT
Hey........ guys !! How you all are doing ??
Rabi this side....
So today we are going to announce the results of our
BTS SHIPS CATEGORY
How many of you are waiting and excited hmm ??
But before I announced results... just one thing I want to make sure is that
Please don't feel down because of our judgements, you all are amazing, and me and Rabi we both want to say, that you all are writers, never let yourself down because of anything.... okay guys ??
So let's announce the results as we already knew that we have promised to give a short review to all the participants, whether they win or not... so after the announcement of all the categories result we will upload different chapters carrying the reviews of other participant's books.......
So let's don't waste more time......
And yes guys if you are not okay with judges judgment then please don't spam the Judges notification you can take help from the good reviews, and can ignore from which you are not comfortable......
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Congrats
Judge Swan_Nation
Book: As our eyes meet jikook
Title 5/5
Matches the book very well
Burb 5/5
Good for the book
Cover 5/5
Could have used a different cover
Plot 19/20
Not many use this topic but is not the first.
First impression 19/20
I was excited to see harry potter au mixed with Jikook
Flow 10/10
It was a nice flow into the story
Emotions 10/10
Good Emotions!
Character development 8/10
Just enough Character development
Grammar and vocals. 9/10
A few mistakes here and there.
Overall 5/5
It is a good book to read
Total 95/100
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Book: Corazon
By: rabisworld02
Judge: shimla1210
Title: 5/5 well explained and the perfect one
Cover: 4.5/5 wanted something explaining both the characters but i love this too
Blurb: 5/5 well explained,
First impression: 18.5/20 i wanted Tae's point of view also and more into his life
Plot: 18/20- the story seemed boring it seemed like a typical Stockholm syndrome story.
Flow: 9.5/10 it was very good just a little off at times otherwise well don
Emotions: 10/10 it was very very very well explained .
Grammar: 9.5/10 very minor mistakes which i also found only after copy pasting the paragraphs.
Character: 9/10 it was explained well and i liked how they developed and changed , but it felt a little plain , so i wanted the characters to be a little different or unique in their own way
Overall: 4/5 missed out things here and there but a very good read , a little plain needed a plot twist , but i enjoyed it
Total: 93/100
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Book: Faith against fate
By: Naveena_bts
Judge: shimla1210
Title-5/5
very well chosen and used well in the book
Cover-4/5 well done but the small fonts at the bottom weren't seen
Blurb-3/5 it gave away too much it was like a back story which i think could have had an own chapter
First impression-20/20 it was amazing and got straight into the story no stretching the story's start .
Plot-19/20 it was really well done but the latest chapter feels like a new part of the story . now makes me feel bad only for one character whereas this story is a story where both had hardships and mistakes . so i would like that to continue . otherwise the story is well though out hoping for a sudden plot twist where jk isnt shown as only bad and unforgiving i want to see him also have some secret or where he saves them and it isnt ,being the good guy who turned bad .
Flow-9.5/10 a good flow a lil bit stumbles here and there but it was very nice.
Emotions- 10/10 . remarkable .
Vocabulary/grammar-9.5/10 the punctuation was wrong here and there and vocabulary also is in one place.
Character development- 8/10 there isnt much character development through the events in the book because we see tae change due to what his husband did in the past and jk's change to , but i dont see the change happening so i dont know alot about how they changed in the past.
Overall- 4/5 i loved it few things i wish were there but its a pleasant read i hope you continue writing like this.
Total - 92/100.
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Congratulations to all of our winners.
Those who didn't win, don't feel down. You have the potential to be a writer just need some improvements.
Hope to see you again in near future.
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