BTS SHIPS OTHER RESULTS
Judge: shimla1210
Title-4.5/5 its good but as an audience wont be eye catching
Cover-4.5/5 the font at left bottom is soo small if u want to add add it a little it bigger
Blurb-5/5 very well done , gives the foundation of the story and doesnt give out too much of the plot
First impression-19/20 i was shocked at how it started but i didn't mind it as much when i got into the story i wished for a little understanding on their relationship that time
Plot-18.9/20 a good plot wanting for a sudden stop. just want some twist.
Flow-9.5/10 breaks here and there , but its good
Emotions- 8/10 i dont find the sweet moments the feeling , i see yoongi loving jimins dance his body smile and other things but i would want them to know each other truly , not by kindness or caring also by insecurities ,problems, and loving each others im
Vocabulary/grammar-9.8/10 very well done , very few to none gramatical issues
Character development- 8/10 till the chapters done didnt see much of it
Overall- 3.8/5 loved it but a few things i wished were
Total -91/100
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Book: Revenge
Written by: uzlove18
Judge: rabisworld02
Title: 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
First impression: 18/20
Plot: 20/20
Flow: 8/10
Emotions: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Character: 9/10
Overall: 4/5
Total: 90/100
Review: its really a good and unique story. However even thought the title matches the plot line but it is too common and over used. But I personally think it was a good story. Not cliché or same revenge stories on wattpad, you write it beautifully making me read its sequel too. Good job.
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Book: Vengeance
Written by: btsachu
Judge: rabisworld02
Title: 5/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4/5
First impression: 17/20
Plot: 19/20
Flow: 8/10
Emotions: 7/10
Grammar: 7/10
Character: 8/10
Overall: 4/5
Total: 83/100
Review: Its a good and unique plot. Cover need a little improvement though. Title perfectly matches the plot line, however grammar had some faults as you should use "bought" instead of "buyed" . needs a little improvement on the emotions. But over all its good. I am waiting for the next chapter.
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Judge: GryffindorPoseidon1
Book - When Our worlds collide
Title - 5/5
The title goes well with the story, and pretty catchy at the same time. But, I'm pretty sure that it says "When Our Wonders Collide" In the award shows list, so please check that out.
Cover - 1/5
The cover sure has Taekook on it, but it has the main text written in Korean, in which I'm not sure what is written. I'm assuming it means when our worlds collide or such, but i can't be sure. Also, in the middle picture, Taehyung isn't seen due to the text, so it looks like there is Jungkook on two pictures and Taehyung on only one. So, I would recommend you to change them.
Description - 3/5
The description is good, but a little lengthy. It would look better of you could decrease it's size, and there parts which do not look alligned in the description. For example, after the quote, you have written that the quote was said by "the alchemist". However, it looks slightly disalligned from other devices, so I would recommend putting it in the next line Instead. Apart from that, the description is quite good, and I love the humour in the bottom part.
First impression - 18/20
When I read the before you read, I had actually mistaken it for the prologue/first chapter. When I saw all those dance fonts, it really made me want to not read the story, since I thought that the story might be written in fonts too, and this really threw me off. But, when I scrolled ahead and saw the trailer, it really surprised me. The trailer is really well made, and very intruiging too. It made me want to really read the story, and I absolutely loved it.
Plot - 19/20
This plot is a little common in general fiction, but the author has made it unique in its own way. I liked how the story started off with slight-angst, it really caught my attention since most of the story are fluffy types. The plot is well built and fun to read.
Flow - 9/10
There is a smooth flow in the story, but in some places it might feel a little fast paced, and in some a little slow paced. However, it's been quickly covered up, and I liked that fact.
Emotions - 6/10
As good as the story is, it dosent really evoke any emotions in the reader. It just feels like a normal go-to story.
Grammar/Vocabulary - 9/10
There are barely any grammar mistakes, and I really liked that fact about this story.
Character development - 7/10
Character development is seen, but it's either too rushed or way too slow.
Overall - 3/5
Total - 80/100
Review -The book has a well structured plot, but description needs to be improved a little, apart from that, I look forward to reading more of this book.
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Book - Why Not Me
By:IcicleCrest
Judge: GryffindorPoseidon1
Title - 5/5
The title goes well with the story, but its not very catchy. Apart from that, its pretty good
Cover - 1/5
The cover sure has Taekook on it, but its not good at all. Only the bottom parts of their body is fully seen, and the font is not good at all. There is no color combination among them, and if that could be changed it would be great.
Description - 2/5
The description is good, but a little too short. . It would look better of you could increase it's size, and also try not to use too many question marks in the description. After every question, you have given 3 question marks, which makes you look like a rookie author, so I would recommend avoiding using that. Also, it kinda gives away what is about to happen in the story completely, making the reader not want to read the book.
First impression - 13/20
The prologue is way too short. It didn't make me want to read ahead at all, but the only thing that kept me going was the plot. I had a good feeling about it, so I read on.
Plot - 12/20
This plot is quite common. It's seen nearly everywhere, and I'm not sure what makes it unique. Although It's well written and structured, it's not unique.
Flow - 9/10
There is a smooth flow in the story, but in some places it might feel a little fast paced, and in some a little slow paced. However, it's been quickly covered up, and I liked that fact.
Emotions - 5/10
The story is good, but no emotions. It just feels like plain old writing.
Grammar/Vocabulary - 4/10
Okay, so this book needs some grammar and vocab correction. There are several words being used over and over again, and this made me lose interest in the story. I would reccomend going through it again, or just giving it to an editing shop.
Character development - 7/10
Character development is seen, but it's either too rushed or way too slow. It would be better if you could elaborate a few scenes more.
Overall - 2/5
Total - 51/100
Review -The book has a well structured plot, but the plot is a little overused and seen in many places. The grammar needs a little work too. Apart from these few things, I highly enjoyed it and waiting for further stories and chapters.
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Book - Lost Stars
By: bts_fantasy
Judge: GryffindorPoseidon1
Title - 3/5
The title is really catchy and matches the story, but the all-caps dosent look good. It makes it look like you are a rookie writer. I would also reccomend adding "Vkook" Or "taekook" After the title, just to inform your readers that its a taekook ff.
Cover - 3/5
The cover is really well made, but it would have been better if the title is on the bottom, as it attracts more attention in that way.
Description - 3/5
It's short, but unlike other stories it's really catchy. However, the side ships and warning need not have those huge colored dots on them, small ones would do too. Also, caps need to be used in correct places.
First impression - 13/20
The prologue is basically the description, so I would recommend changing that and putting something else that might actually excite the reader. Once again, grammar needs to be used properly here too.
Flow - 9/10
The story went pretty smoothly after everything was introduced.
Emotions - 9/10
In all honesty, this is the only story that I read which invoked some emotions in me. I felt deeply sad in some parts, truly happy in some and so on.
Grammar/vocab - 6/10
The grammar is good, but needs improvement in some places. Also, capitalization really needs to be used.
Character development - 8/10
Character development felt a little rushed in a few places.
Total - 78/100
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Judge Swan_Nation
Book: Innocent love
Title 5/5
Matches the book very well
Burb 4/5
Good for the book could be a little more descriptive and word choice could have been better
Cover 5/5
It matches the book
Plot 10/20
Not enough to read to get to the plot
First impression 16/20
It was kinda hard because I am not a Taekooker, but still read it because it was good for the three chapters
Flow 10/10
It was a nice flow into the story
Emotions 10/10
Good Emotions!
Character development 8/10
Need a little more character devolopment
Grammar and vocals. 8/10
A few mistakes here and there.
Overall 3/5
Really wished it was finshed
Total 79/100
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Book name: Two worlds apart
By: unolocachica
Judge: GryffindorPoseidon1
Title: 5/5
Amazing, goes with the story.
Cover: 3/5
The cover is good, but for some reason, it doesn't give off th correct vibes for this book.
Description: 2/5
The description practicallt gave off the whole story. The part where it says " falling in love with a trouble maker" thats more or less what the ending I supposed to be. I would recommend to change it.
First impression: 17/20
The story didnt disappoint me at all. It definitely caught my attention.
Plot: 19/20
The plot is unique, even though there are many fanfics with hidden plot in them, writer made it unique in her own way.
Emotions: 6/10
The story was good, but the author has to improve this factor of the story.
Grammar: 9/10
The grammar is good, but it can be better.
Character development: 9/10
I think as the story goes on, writer shows the behavior and changing in characters.
Review: I personally liked this book, but improvements can be made. Keep going, good luck.
Total: 70/100
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Book: Excuse me but...do I know you?
By: PurpledFujoshi
Judge:
Title: 3/5
The title sounds like a random quote from the book. It should be used for the prologue not for the title.
Cover: 2/5
The cover doesn't look like you put an effort into it at all. Its not catchy either. I would recommend you to use a graphic shop for this.
Blurb: 3/5
It is too short for a reader to pick this story. Alos I think the views count you put in description is unnecessary. You should change it.
First impression: 5/20
The first chapter made me boring. It contains only 2-3 sentences. Its not very catchy. It made me believe that all the other chapters are short like this. It would be best if you call it a prologue instead of chapter.
Plot: 19/20
Even though the story is not written well but teg idea used is very unique.
Flow: 6/10
Flow really needs to be improved. In some places it is too fast and in some places it is too short.
Emotions: 6/10
Places where they should be showed,its not seen. I have to say you need a lot improvement in this.
Grammar: 6/10
This art really needs improvement. I would recommend you an editing shop.
Character development: 7/10
It feels either too fast or too slow. Not being able to convince the reader.
Total: 57/100
Review:
Plz don't think I am being harsh or cold, go through the things pointed out. You have the potential, but just need some improvement. Best of luck.
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Judge Swan_Nation
Book: Hope
By: Kinza244
Title 5/5
Matches the book very well
Burb 4/5
Good for the book, could be a little more descriptive
Cover 4/5
It is a good cover but does not match the story. Also, it is a little
blurry
Plot 19/20
Not the most original plot but the way you wrote it was good
First impression 16/20
It was kinda hard because I am not a Taekooker, but still read it because it was good
Flow 9/10
It was a nice flow into the story
Emotions 10/10
Good Emotions!
Character development 8/10
Need a little more character development
Grammar and vocals. 8/10
A few mistakes here and there.
Overall 5/5
If you like Mafia falls in love with the innocent this is the book for you
Total 88 /100
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Judge Swan_Nation
Book:
Stockholm Syndrome.
Title 5/5
Matches the book very well
Burb 4/5
Good for the book could be a little more descriptive and word choice could have been better
Cover 5/5
It confused me why a female was on the cover but it matches the book
Plot 19/20
Not many use this topic but is not the first.
First impression 16/20
It was kinda hard because I am not a Taekooker, but still read it because it was good
Flow 10/10
It was a nice flow into the story
Emotions 10/10
Good Emotions!
Character development 8/10
Need a little more character devolopment
Grammar and vocals. 8/10
A few mistakes here and there.
Overall 5/5
It is a good book to read
Total 90/100
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Judge Swan_Nation
Book: My little Moon
Title 5/5
Matches the book very well
Burb 4/5
Good for the book could be a little more descriptive and word choice could have been better
Cover 5/5
It confused me why a female was on the cover but it matches the book
Plot 15/20
Not the most original plot
First impression 16/20
It was kinda hard because I am not a Taekooker, but still read it because it was good
Flow 10/10
It was a nice flow into the story
Emotions 10/10
Good Emotions!
Character development 9/10
Good character development
Grammar and vocals. 8/10
A few mistakes here and there.
Overall 4/5
It is not the most original topic
Total 86/100
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