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Idol Companion
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Author :: ameliaphoenix36

Reviewer :: chemicalkrackel

First Impression :: 3/20

I'll be honest, the only thing that eloped me was the synopsis's line that talks about a man suspended into the realm of living while his body fights against the horrors of a coma. The story's main idea gave me a spark of interest.

The name and cover didn't really have me interested, it was like a so and so deal, what I recommend is to give your cover a change that contributes in the section of a light aesthetic that gives you an idea of fluff and completely hides out the fact of the heartbreak the reader awaits in the first chapter itself.

About the name, I'll leave it to you, I am fine with it but it's exactly not what I'd like, it's simple and okay for the moment and the plotline.

Beginning of a new start :: 5/10

Potential information is given, the accident and everything, it had me overthinking and emotional, not gonna lie because it's actually something that'd stick to one's mind.

The chapters from where the comical entrance of the first lead is given are interesting and the way she introduces her sisters is even more fun to read but what sticks me a finger is that its character pillar is cliche and normal but in a really fun way so it's bearable.

What I didn't like is too much additional information that leads to nowhere, few things like students popularity sculpts or the comic ways of places aren't really necessary so I'd suggest taking a cut and try getting your book edited.

Concept & plot :: 20/25

I like the story and it's a potential crackfic that'll really entertain me when I am definitely not enjoying my day. It has a mixture of sad elements and ups of chilly innocent fun; it's convincing and up to liking.

Like I said earlier the plotline has a lot of additional not needed information and it leads to nowhere so I suggest hiring an editor or going through the book yourself will be a good opt.

Characters & emotions :: 10/15

I won't lie but I cried over the idea of someone getting into an accident and Jimin in the book at that, it's not like I know him personally or something but it's just that even the slightest bit of tragic tendencies about someone we have grown to like blooms, we cry, so I'd give you an up for that but also including cute and fun moments.

I'd suggest you to give more of your attention to how you form your stances in case you want to fill your works with emotions that hit hard, try filling them from the insides rather than exaggerating on the outside.

Tone & style :: 7/10

Gonna give you an up for it, it's an average style, nothing gigantic or grand or anything poor, it's just okay, reminds me of newsletter and articles.

Try forming them into a chain of wordings that conclude with enriched lucid style, something that everyone's gonna enjoy and intake.

Grammar :: 5/20

Rereading is a must, too many typos and word functioning that are too basic and don't do justice to the plotline that's taken into consideration.

Search the web up and look forward to words that adhere to extensive reader interest.

An extra note :: When I say I find potential please make sure you know it's a rare statement coming from my side, it's rare to find people who have potential and can make things better. Don't be saddened with the scoring, just know you impressed me and it's been a while since someone actually did. Work on all the minor and major sitcoms I have pointed out and get it together and please change your cover.

Total :: 45/100