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Accursed
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Author :: apoeticbee

Reviewer :: kimvante_

First Impression :: 17/20

The cover was very neat. But the blending could've been done better because the Taehyung and Jeongguk cutouts that were pasted onto the background are quite protuberant. The fonts used match very well with the colors. The title is plain but the good factor is that the one word itself mirrors the entire plot. The synopsis was intriguing; it genuinely left me wanting to read the story. You didn't reveal too much and only displayed the baseline of the story which was very well portrayed.

Beginning of a new start :: 8/10

The onset chapters were very much indulging. Though you could've eliminated a few paragraphs as they seemed exaggerated. I know you were trying your best to describe the story more precisely but it was too detailed. This may cause the readers to get bored pretty quickly and eventually skip sentences and sometimes paragraphs that might contain important information.  

Concept and plot :: 18/25

The concept of the story wasn't new. I've read a closely similar story to yours where lovers killed in the past were reincarnated. But the good aspect of your story is the effort you put into shaping the mysteries and leaving the readers wanting more. The hidden truths are yet to unravel but for that, the readers will have to read from scratch. Even if they want to, they cannot skip chapters to reach the end because each chapter of yours contains valuable data that will help them understand the outcome better.

Characters and emotions :: 13/15

Okay, so whenever I read a story, I focus more on the character build-up and their sentiments. You've done a great job at portraying the emotions of the characters. I was able to feel their pain which shows that your way of describing the sensations of each character was bravo. Though I can't say the same about the characters themselves. I wanted the characters to be more innovative and not the same as every cliché Taekook wolf au. I can see that you tried being creative with your characters but you ended up applying the same characteristics. I hope you try to diffuse unique qualities in their personalities.

Tone and style :: 8/10

Your way of describing the story was very appealing. I liked how you weren't rushing the plot and taking things slowly by explaining each and every detail with utmost concentration and delivering the right speeches to help understand the situation more accurately. Your writing style was also very attractive. The paragraphs weren't too short nor too long, just the right amount of lines. The only defect I found was the flashbacks. Constant flashbacks can highly confuse the reader. Try not to add past events in each chapter and mainly in between the present events. It makes the story appear disfigured.

Grammar :: 18/20

I loved your grammar. The words used weren't plain. I detected many rich words which enhanced the story to a new level. I also loved your descriptive writing style. The way you depicted each and everything was very satisfying to read as I was able to imagine such scenarios in my head. The absence of colons and semicolons was located in a few areas. 

I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

Total :: 82/100