OK so I decided to update anyway even though no one commented but me. Please tell me if I'm doing anything wrong or if this story is not intense enough. And it might be a bit hard to me to update due to school, but in the summer business should be booming! Vote comment and enjoy! :-D 

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      We were walking on the beach with our footprints disappearing silently into the sand. The sky had 

been turning all different shades of yellow, pink and violet. With the underbelly of the clouds peach, 

and the tops dark purple, it was the most bizarre set of colors that I had ever seen a sunset show. 

After the spectacular show, the clouds started gathering and a mist enveloped us. Any light source 

was snuffed out due to the thickness of the fog. The coming darkness forced me to say,"Shouldn't we 

go back? Its getting late." Ana said, "No I want to watch the ocean, just a little bit longer you know I 

hate going home." "Sorry, for a moment there I forgot all our problems." I said. The sky rumbled and a

 furious wind blew hard enough to pick up a car. I was pulled up into the air and felt a strange power 

surge through me so fast that I passed out. Ana couldn't see me, for there was a bright light had 

blocked her vision....but after she saw me lying on the beach in an awkward position. My hair was

 wild and tangled with a new streak of white. Ana ran over only to find that I had mysteriously grown

 wings! They were white with blue and gray feathers. She also discovered a silver and gray bracelet 

that had my birthstone, Aqua blue. Then Ana was pulled into the ocean with a blue light glowing 

around her and she transformed into a mermaid! I was shocked at my own wings let alone my best 

friend had a tail! Ana's tail was the brightest shades of blue with purple sparkles and were flowing 

down like pixie dust. Her hair was already a natural red but this time she had curls and a crown made

 of gold with her birthstone, a tourmaline pink-like stone that had sparkles. When she was done

 transforming she fell into the water and seaweed lifted her up like it was a chair! The wind became 

stronger and the storm more wild with the sea raging and throwing its waves upon the beach and 

damaging the houses that were too close. Anna and I sat where we were, stunned by what had just 

happened. Then Anna yelped with glee and sped off with one mighty flip of her tail. "Wait, Anna we 

need to find out what's happening to us! Don't swim away! Be sensible!" But she was long gone. I 

sighed. I decided to try and head back home to seek shelter from the storm and wait for Anna to get 

back. But what would my dad think? Nope, no exit there. And anyone else I knew would think I was a 

freak. Better stay here I guess. I headed towards a small cove. The wind kept catching my wings and I 

kept being pushed back. On my fifth attempt to walk, I sat on the ground and didn't get up. Why 

wasn't it letting me walk? I looked to the side and noticed a small cliff about ten feet high. The wind

 kept blowing me towards it, or was I just imagining things? I was then lifted off of the sand and 

thrown towards the cliff. "Ok, Ok!" I shouted to no one in particular. As soon as I got on the cliff I 

started soaring upwards. I panicked but was already nearing the end of the cliff. I dug in my heels for 

a moment and stopped. I took two deep breaths, closed my eyes, spread my wings, and jumped. 

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