Aries
Introducing -TaintedBlack-'s OC, Aries Cross Rosario!
[WARNING! There are some inappropriate/offensive words and triggering topics.]
- Alright, pretty good so far. Very detailed.
- Strengths aren't too overpowered and she has no powers at all since she's human! Great job!
- Weaknesses are relatable and realistic. Great job again!
- Ah! So it's Zodiac themed! I absolutely love it!
- Alright! Likes and dislikes are realistic and normal for a human being, especially an American! This is a great and detailed OC so far!
- Okay, lots of piercings. That's fine. Piercings are cool!
- Sounds like this girl loves her makeup!
- The way she dresses reminds me of how one of my friends dresses! Awesome attire!
- Aw! She's in denial! How adorable!
- This song is amazing and catchy! It matches your character fairly well!
- Hahaha! "Robots with no intelligence"! You've got that right!
- She needs to admit to herself that she may not be straight! She's so stubborn!
Overall, this character is well fleshed out and really developed! Awesome job with this one!
It makes me happy to see fellow writers whose character's actually have development behind them! It makes me feel proud as well!
Bye for now!
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