Hello all!

I just have a few questions for you.
This is my first time writing a story like this. This plot wasn't the one originally decided for this title. This struck me all of a sudden.

Seeing very less response from the readers, as in very less comments and votes, I wanted to clarify whether you all are really liking the plot.

1) Is the plot boring?

2) Are you all liking the twists?

3) Do you feel the pace of the story is too slow/ fast?

4) Any suggestions? Any corrections?

Please reply to these questions in the inline comments. It's a sincere request to kindly share your honest opinions.

Else, I'm not able to understand how well or how bad the story is coming out.
I need to know so that I can improvise. 

The writings in-between ie the poems, shayaris, all are written by me. So I would love to hear comments on those too.

Please feel free to criticize. I really don't mind constructive criticism.

Even if your response is all positive, still please answer the above questions.🙏

Lovingly,
Pratyu