Reviewed by: -forever-summer-
Book Title: Found you
Author's Name: Mitali2203

Cover: 6/10

The cover of your book is nice but isn't attractive enough for the readers to pick your book. The image could be more clear. The font doesn't suit the image or the genre of the book. There wasn't any element that would connect the book to the story. Try finding a picture that symbolizes the title or the book. If you've any difficulties in making a cover there are a lot of designers on Wattpad who might be willing to help you with that.

Title: 4/10

The title of your book is good, matches the book well but it is a way too common title. The title of the book must be unique enough to convince a reader that this book will be different and is unique. When the title isn't unique, they will be convinced that the plot is going to same as all the other fanfiction or romance books.

Blurb/Description: 6/10

Starting the blurb with a quote or poetry always attracts the readers. But the other part of the blurb could be written better and more detailed. It must give insights about the pasts of both Yoongi and Jimin, and not just Yoongi. Bringing Lisa [Yoongi's wife] seemed unnecessary. The blurb somehow seemed incomplete. Try to add some more about their lives, what they do and how their relationship is different from Yoongi's with his wife Lisa.

Creativity and originality: 6/10

The tropes used seemed to be a common one. The first meet at the party and cheating partner is a commonly used trope in romance books. There are a lot of storybooks on Wattpad with similar storylines. Only when your book is unique enough it will attract more readers.

Plot and Flow: 9/20

As I said the basic plot idea was simple and kinda overused. There weren't any cliffhangers or plot twists that would keep the readers interested to turn to the next chapter. The flow of the book wasn't as great. Maybe it was because of the constant change in the point of view, grammatical errors, or the structure of the sentences that made it seem incomplete and disturbing.

Character Development: 5/10

I know five chapters don't give enough space for you to improvise the character. But you could've shown the parts where Yoongi got tired of being walked all over by his wife. Jimin's character still seems a mystery even after showing him or mentioning him all the chapters. His character isn't given enough space for development or to connect to the reader at all.

Writing style, Grammar, spellings, etc.: 4/10

The writing style was different and unique. You were more focused on the detailing and didn't focus on the characters or the plot. Even though focusing on the detailing is a good thing, many writers don't, balancing the plot, character, and detail is important. It will seem incomplete and rushed without the balance. There were occasional grammatical and punctuation mistakes that disturbed the flow of writing but there weren't any spelling mistakes.

Genre relevance: 7/10

Though you had said it wasn't fanfiction, it still leaned more towards the fanfiction part rather than romance. It was more fanfiction than a Romance book.

Reader enjoyment and Communication with the readers: 4/10

As I said earlier, your writing style was more focused on the detailing. It feels incomplete and rushed, so the readers may not be able to connect with the characters. The readers must be able to connect with the characters and yourself through your writing for them to enjoy your book.

Overall: 51/100

Your book is good, the basic plot is nice and neat, it just needs little improvements here and there for it to be a better read for the readers. Involve the characters more into the story. Explain their dilemmas rather than just stating them. It will help the readers connect with your characters more and enjoy your book more. Editing your book once will rectify those little grammatical and punctuation mistakes. Really sorry for the late review. All the best for your other works.