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Results for Mystery (Updated)

All raw scores and comments are in this chapter for Fantasy genre. A later chapter will be posted dedicated to all winners and details of how to claim the prizes, so stay tuned! If you spot any calculation mistakes, please feel free to PM us or comment beside the error. Thank you for joining us and all of you were all wonderful writers ♥️

Update: There's been an error in the scoring as the judge made a mistake on the total score for Enjoyment (*/10). Original score sent by judge was (*/5)

Rank: 1st

Nightfall's Survival by CalmGuy9
Judged By: _Jonquillequeen_

Cover - 9/10
The cover is really nice and soothing. It really fits with the story theme and genre perfectly.

Title/Blurb - 7/10
The title is really unique and eye-catching, though the blurb was quite short. Plot - 30/30
One word to describe the book; mesmerizing. The moment I started reading the quote till the end of the book where you describe how humans are mysterious creatures, indeed they are, I was truly head over heels for your book. Truly amazing.

Flow - 9/10
As a short story, it should go through a fast pace and indeed it goes rhythmically just like that.The story had been fitted very beautifully in just 8 chapters.

Character Development - 12/15
The characters have been portrayed very nicely, though in some cases I couldn't pinpoint the emotions.

Anticipation - 10/10
I was willing to read the whole book, it was really interesting.

Enjoyment - 10/10
Throughout I'm awestruck with the book. I enjoyed it, it was thrilling. Language-3/5 Your writing style is really nice though grammatical errors were there.

TOTAL - 90/100

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Rank: 2nd

Dandelion by bored_mama
Judged By: _Jonquillequeen_

Cover – 8/10
I like the cover and it was really eye-catching, the font is really great.

Title/Blurb – 9/10
The title is really striking and unique in its own way as well as the blurb. The moment I end up reading it, I am sure I'm going to read the whole story.

Plot – 29/30
Honestly, I've read many books related to vampires and supernatural stories but I would like to say that the plot of your book is clearly something different, a good difference and I can exactly imagine the scenes.

Flow – 8/10
Though the flow was too fast according to me but again, the timing of plot twists was accurate.

Character development – 13/15
As the genre is mystery, the characters should imply a mysterious aura too and you didn't disappoint me there, because honestly the characters are really intriguing. Though in some cases, their emotions were kind of muddled up.

Anticipation – 9/10
I was really hooked to the story and was willing to read each and every chapter of the book.

Enjoyment – 9/10
All in all, it was a thrilling wonder for me so I really enjoyed the story.

Language – 4/5
The writing style was the main thing that attracted me, though there were places where punctuations were misused but the way you've written each and every detail, it really fascinates me.

TOTAL: 89/100

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Rank: 3rd

Eye candy by Jellycuddles19_
Judged By: _Jonquillequeen_

Cover- 9/10
The cover looks really nice and it fits the story perfectly.

Title / blurb- 8/10
The title is really unique and the blurb is really interesting and eye-catching. The blurb indeed catch my vision and makes me hooked to the story immediately.

Plot - 28/30
Overall, the story is amazing and really mysterious. I was so mesmerized with each and every chapters that I ended up reading all the chapters. Though at some places were quite confusing sometimes but all in all, a great package.

Flow- 8/10
As the story went through past and present events, it was quite intriguing and sudden plot twists were commonly seen which make the book more entertaining.

Character development - 14/15
Characters were described really nicely. I can just imagine each protagonist as well as antagonist emotions.

Anticipation - 9/10
The story was intriguing and mysterious and it actually made me read all the chapters at once! Enjoyment - 9/10
I enjoyed the story, it was entertaining and very thrilling!

Language - 3/5
Your writing style is really nice, simple yet beautiful. Though at some places there are grammatical errors and tenses were misplaced but overall, it's really amazing!

TOTAL - 88/100

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A FAVOR TO FULFILL by _sfiiia_
Judged by: victorampeire

Cover - 8/10
Nice and aesthetic cover. Good wording

Title & Blurb - 7/10
Title is relevant and blurb is good though lengthy

Plot - 25/30
Great story line

Flow - 8/10
steady pace

Character Development - 12/15
Characters are good and relatable even though they could have been well differentiated.

Anticipation - 9/10
Suspense present

Enjoyment - 9/10
I personally enjoyed the book

Language - 3.5/5
A few mistakes here and there but overall good

TOTAL: 81.5/100

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Wreckage by TSAsimplicity1
Judged by: victorampeire

Cover - 8/10
Title is big enough and it's beautiful though I would have preferred it if it was a knife since it is used more.

Title & Blurb - 8/10
Can clearly see the wreckage. Blurb is quite lengthy to me

Plot - 21/30
Scenes are imaginable but I find something lacking when it comes to a lot of things.

Flow - 7/10
Speed is average

Character Development - 11/15
Characters are good but I don't know much about Dev to relate to him.

Anticipation - 6/10
Not much suspense in the book.

Enjoyment - 6/10
It's fair. Not much action to enjoy, really.

Language - 2/5
A lot of frequent grammatical errors and missing words.

TOTAL: 69/100

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Prisoners of Love by MiniMoxx
Judged by: victorampeire

Cover - 7/10
Nice and aesthetic cover

Title & Blurb - 9/10
Relevant and nice blurb

Plot - 24/30
Plot is nice and riveting not too fast not too slow

Flow - 7/10
It flows at an average speed. Bordering on slow

Character Development - 12/15
Good characterisation

Anticipation - 8/10
I want to know more about June's life the more I read.

Enjoyment - 7/10
I am enjoying the way Ethan is not telling June anything about her past life. He is a trickle Truther

Language - 3.5/5
A few minor mistakes here and there.

TOTAL: 77.5/100

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CARNATIONS by prajakta_19
Judged by: victorampeire

Cover - 9/10
Aesthetic and relevant cover

Title & Blurb - 8/10
Creative title though I don't see where the carnations are used yet.

Plot - 24/30
Well-described scenes.

Flow - 6/10
I find it slow

Character Development - 13/15
Characters are relatable

Anticipation - 9/10
She had me glued then left me on a cliffhanger

Enjoyment - 8/10
I did enjoy the drama

Language - 3/5
A few typos here and there with some grammatical errors

TOTAL: 80/100

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PARLOR TRICKS by 0liviaRose436
Judged by: victorampeire

Cover— 8/10
Nice and intriguing cover

Title and Blurb — 8/10
Creative title and inciting blurb

Plot – 25/30
Riveting plot and a great storyline

Flow – 6/10
no offense but I find some scenes irrelevant

Character development— 13/15
relatable characters

Anticipation – 7/10
Not much suspense

Enjoyment – 8/10
The well described scenes made me enjoy the book

Language – 4/5
Good vocabulary and minimal grammatical errors

TOTAL: 79/100

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His second queen by thearcherxgirl
Judged By: _Jonquillequeen_

Cover - 9/10
Cover is really beautiful and eye-catching, the colour combination gives the natural vibes of royalty, similar to the story theme.

Title & Blurb - 8/10
The title is relevant to the story as well as the blurb brings an interesting hunch out of it. Though I could easily detect the plot already but at last it really hooked me to the story.

Plot - 27/30
Though the story revolves around the royal family it gives a nice description of the modern era too and that's how the plot get's interesting. And there are enough details as to how Saanjh and Parthveer's relationship grows. There were plot holes in between though.

Flow - 8.5/10
The story was predicted easily but the timing of plot twists are great.

Character Development - 13/15
As the story is written in third person pov, it actually gives more description about the protagonist as well as antagonist. I can clearly imagine the characters. Though the characters are too unreal, I mean to say; no flaws.

Anticipation - 9/10
Clearly, the story was really nice and I was willing to read the whole book. Enjoyment : 4/5 I enjoy the book. It was really thrilling and entertaining.

Language - 3/5
The first half was clearly mixed with spelling mistakes but as I go through the book, it keeps on going better.

TOTAL - 81.5/100

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Broken by Areeba019
Judged By: _Jonquillequeen_

Cover – 3/5
The cover is a bit messed up but the fonts are really nice and unique. It did fit the story theme.

Title/Blurb – 9/10
The title really resembles the story theme and the blurb is really eye-catching, it intrigues me a lot.

Plot – 25/30
It is really interesting; from the start till the chapters I've read I was hooked to it really well. Though in some cases there are plot holes as the storyline was going on the wrong track but overall it was interesting.

Flow – 8.5/10
The rhythm of the story was flowing nicely but there were some scenes which were too sudden for a reader.

Character development – 13/15
Morgan is a mysterious character in my eyes and I found her quite riveting. As well as your other characters make a good impact in my eyes.

Anticipation – 8/10
Your book attracted my vision and I was willing to read the whole book.

Enjoyment – 8/10
I really enjoy the story though in some cases it was too clashing but overall it's a nice story.

Language – 3/5
For sure, you've to go through your grammar and edit a bit, because there are some places where the verbs are misplaced.

TOTAL - 77.5/100

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