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Results for Humour/Teen Fic

These are the scores for the above genre another chapter will be posted dedicated to all winners and details of how to claim the prizes so stay tuned!
(Sorry for the miscalculation!)

Rank: 1st

Angel Full Of Flowers by writingjuniper
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 9/10
Title & Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 28/30
Flow - 10/10
Character Development - 13/15
Anticipation - 9/10
Enjoyment - 9/10
Language- 2.5/5

TOTAL - 89.5/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hi! I like the simplicity and the pleasant aura your book cover gave! Your blurb matches well with the cover and your title is unique yet catchy. I like the exchange of conversations between the main characters. I also like how your chapters were neither too long nor too short for the readers to anticipate the next scenes. There were just a few technicalities such as missing commas, excessive use of punctuation marks like exclamation points and question marks and uncapitalized letters but those can be fixed by editing later on. Overall, I was excited to scroll further to head on to the rest of the story. Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

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Rank: 2nd

In Need Of A Saviour by KrystalGroucutt5533
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 8/10
Title & Blurb - 7/10
Plot- 28/30
Flow- 10/10
Character Development - 12/15
Anticipation- 10/10
Enjoyment- 10/10
Language - 2/5

TOTAL - 87/100

FOLLOWED JUDGE: No

Hello! I love the book cover! It was so full of longing and compassion. Your blurb and title complemented it well! I saw a lot of character development in the first three chapters alone and I cannot help but be angry with Richard for treating her that way. I like how you introduced the character of Troy and I was instantly hopeful they will get along well. I love the choice of words and your narration! There were just a few technicalities like missing punctuation marks such as commas and excessive use of capitalized letters. You can use word intensifiers like warned and yelled instead. But those can be fixed by editing later on. Overall, I still love it! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

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Rank: 3rd

Love With A Cost by riseofthejester
Judged By: devianmisfit

Cover- 6.5/10
Title & Blurb - 6/10
Plot - 24/30
Flow- 7.5/10
Character Development - 15/15
Anticipation - 10/10
Enjoyment - 10/10
Language - 4/5 (some grammar here and there)

TOTAL - 83/100
The cover is actually great, but I didn't like the black and white because the white is too contrasting and the black is almost lost. Try to stick with just one type of font style. Your title is interesting, it already gave me hints about the romance, but your blurb is too short! Your story is very real and somehow you've captured your characters really well. I love the complexity and the dialogue. The pacing is great, not too fast and not too slow. The only thing I have against it is that it fits the YA genre and definitely not Teen Fic (you almost got me there lol, but the overall tone and feeling I got was a pretty mature one, that and the topics you will be mentioning in the story). Overall, I enjoyed reading it a lot ♥️

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Carnations by prajakta_19
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 8/10
Title & Blurb - 8/10
Plot - 26/30
Flow - 8/10
Character Development - 13/15
Anticipation - 9/10
Enjoyment - 8/10
Language - 2/5

TOTAL - 82/100
Hello! First of all, I love your book cover! Your blurb matches well with the title and cover! I also like the interaction between characters. I like the enthusiasm of Mia and the rational side of Eva. There were just some technicalities like excessive use of punctuation marks such as exclamation point and question mark, missing commas, typographical and grammatical errors but those can be fixed by editing later on. I love your cliffhangers! They make the readers anticipate the next chapter! Overall, I like it! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

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SO FAR YET SO NEAR by Fantastiasco
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 8/10
Title & Blurb - 8.5/10
Plot - 25/30
Character Development- 12/15
Anticipation- 7/10
Enjoyment - 9/10
Language - 2/5

TOTAL: 71.5/100
FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hello! I must say that despite the sad vibe your title and blurb gave, the colors in your cover makes it pleasant to look at. Your blurb, somehow, was a little too revealing. I suggest lessening the lines of the main characters to not give away too much of the story. I also love the interactions between characters. I also commend your richness in vocabulary. There were just a couple of technicalities such as excessive use of punctuation marks like exclamation points and question marks, missing commas and typographical errors. But those can be fixed by editing later on. Overall, I still like it! Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

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DOUBLE IRIS by ibby_gal
Judged By: happysnowfeet

Cover - 9/10
Title & Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 23/30
Flow - 7/10
Character Development - 13/15
Anticipation - 9/10
Enjoyment - 9/10
Language - 1/5

TOTAL- 70/100
FOLLOWED JUDGE: Yes

Hi! I love the mysterious vibe your book cover gave! Your blurb was beautiful! It matches so well with your title and cover! The choice of words were great too! There were just a couple of technicalities like excessive use of punctuation marks like exclamation point and question marks, missing commas, uncapitalized letters and grammatical errors. But those can be fixed by editing later on. With regards to the plot as well as the flow of the story, it was both fine too. It was neither too fast nor slow-paced. Overall, it was an interesting read. Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

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Arctic Heart by penpatron
Judged By: devianmisfit

Cover - 6/10
Title & Blurb - 5.5/10
Plot - 25/30
Flow - 5.5/10
Character Development - 9/15
Anticipation - 7.5/10
Enjoyment - 10/10
Language - 3/5

TOTAL - 71.5/100
Your cover has several elements ongoing and the overall aesthetic felt like it was a little on the Fantasy side. However, the font is large and clear. The title is interesting and immediately, I made the link when I read the first sentence in your blurb. The blurb is a little too long, I think it would be great if you could break your sentences as they're lengthy. I believe it's the vocabulary or tenses, but several paragraphs did not make sense, and some did perfectly well. This messed with the flow of your story. However, your plot has a lot of action and interesting scenes. It's a little hard to delve deep into your characters and the situation they're in because there's a few details missing. But it does makes me want to read on despite all that (:

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Unfortunate by _babydidntgotback_
Judged By: devianmisfit

Cover - 5/10
Title & Blurb - 4.5/10
Plot - 20/30
Flow - 5.5/10
Character Development - 8/15
Anticipation - 5/10
Enjoyment - 7/10
Language - 3/5 (there's several grammar but they're okay)

TOTAL - 57/100

The cover felt like an aesthetic mood board but I really think it can be improved. I suggest setting the entire background as the photo instead so that you can utilize the space fully. Your blurb is almost like an idea hashing with quite a lot of information thrown in. I suggest editing it again because there's a lot of things going on. Your title has a link to your blurb, but I can't seem to get any hints about what your book is from itself! In your chapters, I think you can improve on releasing information of your characters slowly instead of all the backstory in the next few paragraphs. Your chapters are quite short, and I really think you can dive into the details more such as the descriptions of your characters, the story setting, and also remember to slow down the scenes. Make use of similes and expressions instead of directly telling your readers what was happening :)

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Diary Of A Misanthrope by kundab
Judged By: devianmisfit

Cover - 6/10
Title & Blurb - 8/10
Plot - 18/30
Flow - 6/10
Character Development - 5/15
Anticipation - 5/10
Enjoyment - 6/10
Language - 3/5

TOTAL - 57/100

The cover has slightly dark vibes but the title and author is clearly seen. I suggest changing the font style to something else because the current one squeezes the letters together. Your title is interesting and your blurb is great. Because it's a diary, I can't exactly give you marks for the plot, so I gave it based on a) how realistic the events that transpired, b) the emotions and c) the thought process. Overall, I believe you can improve on self-reflecting and Terra's internal demons. Her fear of humans has not been expressed! It felt as if she was ranting like a usual teenage girl instead of a matured person who had such a horrible past. To explain my point, the diary entries of her first day in school were never about her encounters or discomfort with people, but just random embarrassing moments.

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Ten Dates by shrireddy
Judged By: devianmisfit

Cover - 10/10
Title & Blurb - 7/10
Plot - 23/30
Flow - 7/10
Character Development - 10/15
Anticipation - 8/10
Enjoyment - 7.5/10
Language - 2.5/5 (missing "a"s and grammar here and there)

TOTAL - 75/100

Your cover is really beautiful. I love the shades and how your title stands out from the background. The title is interesting and from your blurb I got the gist of it. But, your blurb can be improved because from the snippet of your story I could understand more than the second part of what you wrote below. The pacing is a little slow, but I enjoyed the events that transpired. I love how the four of them are always together in your story <3 The plot is a little messy and somehow I find it relatable because it depicts how college life was. The characters are still rough but in every situation, you reveal some parts about the four of them which I liked because it shows how differently people react, and the opinions they each have.

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