Title: The Odd Ones Out

Author: KerrmmitCarl

Reviewer: EmberShy

Summary: 2/5

The biggest problem with your summary is the grammar and the fact that it's poorly written.

Consider combing over it and rewriting it. It's somewhat interesting but I think if you rewrite it a little it will be a lot better. 

Grammar: [no score]

The reviewer did give a score of 3/5 initially, but ray_of_sunshine9 didn't quite agree with what was considered 'incorrect grammar'. So, we're leaving grammar out of this review entirely. 

Character Building: 3/5

Your characters are average. They could use something to make them more interesting but they are simple and that's fine.

You do call it the odd ones out though, and I only read up to chapter 3 so that's why I gave an average score.

Writing Style: 3/5

Most of your writing is average and that's not a bad thing. I'm still average and, as you go through writing, you will grow as a writer.

Just remember all the key points in this review, grammar/summary/writing style/etc. They are all the things you should work to grow on in a book.

Your writing style will grow as you continue to write, just do some editing as you go through writing.

Plot + Originality: 3/5

I feel like you're getting tired of seeing 3's but your book is definitely better than a 2.

Your plot isn't very unique -- there are plenty books where the characters are odd and honestly I couldn't really tell if you had a true plot.

Cover: 1/5

I include this as an extra, and I'm really sorry but I saw your note and, yes, you do need a new cover.

Consider a cover shop. The 

TreasureCommunity has one, and I have one on my own awards account, TheMonthlyAwards - and there are many, many more. 

OVERALL SCORE: 12/25

Your book is average, so don't take this personally. 

You just need some editing and to work on some things like grammar, and a new cover. This will surely help you to get a better score in the future.

What I liked about your book was characters were decent and relatable, not whacky and unrealistic and bland. Well done!

What I didn't like about your book was the cover. You should really work on this before anything else.