mY cHaRaCtERs ArEn'T cOoPeRaTiNg

They all have minds of their own and will do whatever they want

JAQ

STOP BEING SO MEAN

I NEED MY READERS TO LIKE YOU SO WHEN YOU DIE THEY WILL BE SAD. WHY DO YOU INSIST ON BEING STUBBORN. WTF.

And I can't figure out how to add more character development for Jesse, since it's from her POV. Like, I understand her personality just fine, we get along when I'm writing, but she needs to be less...flat? nd I'm at a loss of what to do

And Jaq is not cooperating I stg
I keep trying to make her nicer and it just keeps not happening

She opens up a little bit in chapter 14, but then immediately goes back to her usual indifferent self

And Entity 303 doesn't want to be written. He was originally going to show up a lot more, during the trials and stuff, but then it just didn't work

HHHHHHHHHHH

DISAGREEABLE FREAKIN CHARACTERS

Not the bois tho

They're fine

(Actually tbh I enjoy writing them a bit too much haha)

Also fun fact- my entire Shattered Souls draft is over 40,000 words long hhhh

It's fine

This is fine

My stories are just freaking controlling my brain that's all

It's totally fine

Haha

Help

-Rush left to keep writing Shattered Souls (no surprise there rite)-