Do you readers think the story is going to fast out to slow for a story?

Should I try slowing it down or keep it at the pace it is?

Do any of you actually like my story because I haven't received any comments and I'd really love to hear what you guys think of my story.

if you all do like it then please let me know what you like about my book and if there is anything I should improve about it.

Hopefully I have the next chapter up soon and good criticism is very helpful for me.

Love FIfox~