I wake up with a dull pain underlining the numbness in my right arm. Im enveloped by the stench of something rotting. The air is heavy and damp, pressing against my skin like a clammy shroud. Where am i? I have to find my sister. She is the only thing in my life, i can’t lose her. When i was five my whole life became twisted and fucked up. My parents abandoned me and my brother died in a car crash. I had been in there with him. Sadly I only survived. I’ve always blamed myself for his death. I take a deep breath, okay focus Lilly you have to get out of here i breathe.
I look around my surroundings and trace anyway i can escape. There’s a brown old wooden door around 2 metres in front of me. I bet it’s locked, there’s no way it would be that easy for me to get out of here. I just cant believe there ain’t any window in here. Everything is dark and cluttered together. I try opening the door but its locked. Ugh whoever this person is I’m going to kill them. There going to regret not killing me!! I bang on the door like a 5 year old brat stomping their feet upstairs.
“This isn’t a joke!! Let me out cow!” i yell in frustration.
Slow and deliberate, the door handle turns. I gulp and wait for the door to fully open.  A tall white innocent looking guy appears in front of me. I squint my eyes, how could he be stronger then me?
“Hey uh i-,” he tries saying something but i punch him in the mouth.
“Come on i ain’t here to hurt you!” he says.
I punch him again. He swings at me expecting me to jump back, but i leap inside the swing instead hooking my left arm over his right. I grab his throat with my right hand, and dive my right knee into his crotch. I watch him fall onto his knees.
“Ugh im here to help you, not hurt you,” he grunts.
“Then why did you kidnap me?! And i don’t appreciate people putting bags on my head!!” i growl.
“Whoa you got the wrong idea, i helped you. He had a bag over you’re head so i knocked him out and brought you here.”
How can i trust him? He could just be saying that to lure me into him.
“Well im nick,” he smiles
“I didn’t ask for you’re name,” i snap.
“Okay chill haha,” he chuckles.
I grab him by the scruff of the neck. He’s so stupid. He can’t just expect me to chill when my sister is out there maybe being tortured who knows!!
“My fucking sister is gone and im meant to chill? What’s wrong with you?!” i yell angrily.
“Okay calm down i can help you,” he says holding his hands out like im a dog about to fuck him up.
I take a deep breath. Lily okay calm yourself. He’s done nothing and he is even offering to help.
“Im sorry,” i cry.
“I just want my sister back.”
Tears dwell in my eyes. Dont you cry Lily. I hate the bitterness taste of my tears. Crying is just a weakness, it waste time and holds you back. He walks towards me making me tense up.
“Hey you will get her back, i promise,” he says giving me a small smile.
“What’s you’re name?” he asks.
I glare at him.
“Okay oka-,”
“Lily,” i interrupt.
“What a cute name,” he smirks.
I roll my eyes.
“Okay so if you are going to h3lp me then lets get going pretty boy.”
He smiles and grabs hold of a dark green camo bag. He seems like an army guy the way he walks. Strong and muscular.
“Alright, lets do this cheekbums,” he grins.
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