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In Murthy Empire(at 3)

Manik collide with mukthi and went to help her, but mukthi showed her hand 

"I can help myself" mukthi said rudely. Manik was just standing and looking at her with an emotionless face.

He tries to speak "highness I am sor...." But mukthi cut him "wow!!! Senapati ji u said sorry, I can't believe it. Acha from when u started saying sorry and all and even you're helping others. Please don't become good suddenly because it doesn't suit you". And she walks away. Manik just closed his fist and hit the wall in anger till the blood came.

Manik pov-"manik don't be weak and don't listen to anyone. Just do what your mind says. You right on your path Manik"

But suddenly his subconscious" Mr.monster in anger you forgot the work the king gave" and Manik closed his eyes and said irritably.

"Urgh. I know, you no need to say"

Manik subconscious-" yes u know everything that only u lost yourself in our princess".

Manik stammered" I didn't lose to her. She only lost in me and yaa she is not yours okay"said the last four strictly.

Manik subconscious"ooh not mine then your princess aa??" . And Manik said irritably 'shut up and close his subconscious and walk away.

" If he is the same Manik who was in pain a few seconds ago, but he heard about Nandini his pain went away shh don't tell this to manik" Manik subconscious said to readers. 

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In Princess Room (at night)

Nandini is standing in front of the window and doing her favourite work . What let see

"Why my Manik not loving me, is I so bad, or I am not beautiful" Nandini cutely asks her moon uncle as to her habit of complaining about her monstu to moon, and she even talks to bunnies that her puppies are in the garden. She is a pure soul on Earth , even beautiful.

She continued" say na moon uncle, why Manik is like this I know he is a monster that what everyone says but only I can see the pain in eye, I wanted to heal him, but he is not allowing".

And she went to the bed to sleep, and prayed to Ayyappa" Ayyappa please keep everyone in the world happy and healthy. Give small punishments to those who and all do wrong and give some brain to my monstu hehe and keep him and my family happy. Don't know why I am feeling like something is going to happen tomorrow. Please make everything good. And finally u sleep well good night Ayyappa."saying everything cutely Nandini slept immediately to dream about her monstu.

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Morning

At garden 

Manik is practising his sword fight skillfully. He doesn't know that someone has been admiring him for a long time, that is our Nandini who is looking at him from her balcony from where the garden and training area is clearly visible. Someone came from the back and kept hand on shoulder but our Nandini was so lost in her monstu didn't pay any attention to it.

The person said loudly" oh by seeing your Manik you even forgot your childhood friend Nandini this so bad, go I am angry with you"

Nandini came to her thoughts by hearing her best friend Navya voice, she said cutely "no Navya is not like that, how can I forget a wonderful friend like you".

Navya said "don't be so cute Nandini or else I will eat your bubbly check" and Nandini immediately with wide eye cover her check with hand "no please and Navya started laughing at her cute friend.

" Nandini you didn't ready still you know na we have to be at 7 for breakfast but still you didn't ready, king going to scold if we go late hurry up saying this Navya pushed Nandini to get ready.

Navya turned towards the window sign sadly and started thinking"please God please give all the happiness to my baby she is so innocent who won't even think of hurting anyone but fallen love with that monster. If the king comes to know this we will surely not accept this relationship before that this girl should tell everything to Manik".

Navya came out if her thoughts by hearing her baby voice"navu I am ready can we go"

Navya replied with a smile "my baby is so beautiful today, come let's go" both went to dinner table.

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At dinner table

Ishita and Mukthi are ordering the servant strictly because their king came yesterday in a very angry mode. If one mistake happens also they will see the worst of their king.

Nandini excitedly hugged her Ishita from back and kissed her cheek" good morning ma" and went to mukthi hugged her and said "good morning bhabhi" and wished everyone there and Navya too wished . They all smiled and blessed because she is only happiness they got because they all were tensed few minutes ago but when their princess all tension went away. They all heard the sound of the arrival of the king and all went to their respective places and sat . Abhi to came with king.

All sat and had their breakfast, even Navya, because from childhood she lived most of the time with Nandini, even her father, friend of raman.

After breakfast, Raman called everyone to the hall to discuss something, even minsters,Manik and cabir came. 

" I am here to announce something which is good for our country and even for our family reputation, Nandini comes here princess" said raman.

Nandini first saw her mother who assure her with eye and went stand beside her papa 

Raman said loudly "I have decided to get my daughter married to king Saxena's elder son "boom!!!!!

This shocked everyone there but most shocking was to Murthy's , cabir,Navya and someone also. 

"Is it ok princess?" asked Raman affectionately to Nandini. But Nandini is looking down to control her tears because her father just asked her to marry a person who she didn't love. She lifted her eyes and looked at the only person that was Manik who was looking at her also. 

"Princess you said na you will do anything for your papa, and I know my princess will never do anything against her Papa" said raman sweetly according to him. But our poor Nandu doesn't know what to say. Her mother who understood her situation came near her and said to raman.

" Lord why suddenly this discussion now only our Nandini turned 18 let two years go then we will think about her marriage".

" Yes Papa, please don't get Nandini to marry this soon," said Abhi sadly. 

"No, I didn't ask any of you. I just informed you that this marriage will happen, and I know my princess doesn't have any problem, yes or no Nandini " asked Raman strictly with a scared Nandini. She doesn't have any other choice but to agree with her father.

" No Papa , I am ready" said this while looking at Manik who was standing behind her father with painful eyes. Her pain was noticed by two pairs of eyes. Everyone was sad except for Raman as his plan was to work as he likes.

Raman ordered Manik to send a message to Saxena inviting them for lunch tomorrow. And Manik just noted his head as he can't speak anything now and Raman walked away with minsters.

Ishita told Navya and mukthi to take Nandini to her room because she is so exhausted by hearing all this. Manik just looked at Nandini with an emotionless face because he always saw a smiling and cute Nandini who always kept everyone happy but seeing her like this made some pain inside him. Suddenly Cabir just pulled him outside. 

" Cabir why did you drag me here I have work" said Manik 

" Oh just shut up Manik, why are you like this didn't you see pain in her eye when the king was asking her to marry. Do you know the meaning of that?"

"Yes, not only Nandini, every girl will feel sad to leave her family and go" said Manik rubbing his neck.

"You are the wrong manik, she was looking at you, her face clearly showing fear of losing you. I think She Loves you" said cabir sadly which shocked Manik. 

He didn't say anything. How can he? Manik just walked away thinking about cabir words.

Manik pov-" what cabir Said is it true or not??how can princess love me. Do I even deserve someone's love? Yesterday only the king was so angry at Saxena that he suddenly wanted his daughter to marry Saxena's elder son. Fastly I need to find out everything".

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At Saxena Empire

At dinner table

Servants were arranging the table when their king and queen came and sat. The Servants started to serve with a shivering hand because if they made a mistake from them, their king would give the worst punishment ever.

"Where are our sons Madhavi?"asked Rajan. 

" I must be coming," said Madhavi, and they heard a sound of laughing which shows the arrival of their handsome sons.

" Good morning lovely people" said both and sat for breakfast.

While having breakfast suddenly one dasi mistakenly poured hot curry on Aman's hand, and he shouted in pain.

" Oh god, son, are you fine right?" asked Madhavi affectionately. Everyone surrounded him. 

Madhavi, seeing his son in pain, just slapped that dasi many times.

“How dare  you, you bloody servant,how would you hurt my son?" said Madhavi angrily, and she asked two servants to hold her. She just took very hot curry and poured it on that servant.

That servant cried loudly in pain but Madhavi or Saxena didn't show any mercy to her.

Madhavi said rudely" if someone tries to hurt my son hereafter they face my worst. Did u all get it" and Rajan ordered the guards to throw those Servants outside the palaces.

Aman went near her mother, kept his hand on her shoulder and said affectionately" Mahakali please cool down, it's just a small pain. It will go in a week or some, don't worry ma".

"Yes ma brother is saying right, you should control your anger for sometime"giggled Harshad. All smiled at him.

Rajan told"Madhavi I complete forgot to say we got every right to control the Kingdom, you should have seen Murthy face God I can't control my laugh, you should be proud of your son as he is one who won that Madhavi become so happy that the Murthy faced insulted.

"Wow!!!It is very happy news you're saying this now, Aman I am so happy son" said Madhavi happily and ordered servants to make sweets.

"Ma one more happy news soon your daughter-in-law will also be coming said while winking at aman who passed him a fake glare.

" Wow!!!my daughter is coming, I am so eagerly waiting for my princess to come, said Madhavi excitedly. All smiled at her because Madhavi had seen Nandini in some festival function. She just lost her cuteness and beauty and wanted Nandini to be her daughter-in-law and even Aman loved her so it is double happiness for her.

All were eating sweets and enjoying themselves. Aman smiled at his family and went to his room, closed the door and went towards a room which is a secret no one knows and while entering he smiled and said finally princess I am going to have you for lifetime, I can't wait to see you baby.you don't know how you mean to me. I love you so much princess and you're mine I will never allow anyone to come between us baby I promise.

Freeze on Aman smiling face, Nandini crying face and Manik confused face ....

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