So hi again! I went to a water theme park yesterday. I got a new book called Grammar Rules - Writing With Military Precision by Craig Shrives. It helped me a lot and I only read the first three parts. I bought it for $14.95, although on the back of the cover it states £9.99. Note: I'm going to publish the first and second chapter of Rubies On Her Chest, the Jasmine Thomoson fan fiction. I'll take it down after a week or so, so please check it out and leave your thoughts in the comments on how I can improve and if I should continue. The main characters are:

Tom Clarke (Sparkles*) - Music Producer and singer
Harry Marshall - Artist
Lewis Brindley (I won't include Simon to make it less confusing to non-Yognau(gh)ts) - Co-founder
Jasmine Thompson - Singer
Novena Vitchershuën - New intern who sorts out fan mail

And some other people