Author: fallynsinclair

Title: The Path to You

Genre: General fiction? Teen fic? Romance? Mystery? A bit of it all!

Mature: Not too bad

Cover and Title: 4/5
Very pleasing cover, albeit not too unique. I also liked the title, as it works well, but I don't know if I'd say "you". Who's the you you're referring to? Carter or Mark? I say it as less of a love story between Amber and Carter, but more as a story of Amber finding herself.

Blurb: 4/5
Again, really good! But it set me up to think romance was all this story was about, especially with the first two lines. But that's not how the book came across to me. It's a mystery and a story of self discovery more than romance. At least in my mind.

First Impressions: 3/5
Not a huge fan of starting the first chapter with a Dream sort of deal. But it didn't work poorly. It might have made some things too obvious, but I didn't mind much. I like how you started young, so we could see how the three friends start out, through all their changes.

Characters: 4/5
I LOVED MARK! Also, I cried with the last chapter. I also loved all the mystery revolving around Carter, but it's clear that while he made mistakes, he was a truly good person. I also loved all Amber's relationship, especially with her friends.

Grammar: 5/5
Didn't see any errors.

Plot: 4/5
I'm going to try not to spoil... it'll be tough. The ending!!! Mark!!! While I deep down knew it was coming, I was in denial just as much as Amber was.

Overall: 4/5 or 24/30