TITLE: Say You'll Never Let Me Go
LOVE INTEREST: C. Blossom
AUTHOR: THEBAE404

GRAMMAR: 5
CHARACTER: 5
OVERALL BOOK: 5

COMMENTS:
Your story is amazing and well written. Few grammar problems, but no one won't notice it.

I have to say I would definitely recommend this book because not only is it well written but the OC HAS A FAMILY. I know it may seem stupid and all but most of the book never really included the OC family or relatives.

Also, I like to say that your vocabulary is on point as you tried to put more details which are amazing. As well as your writing style which is really professional.

Since you only written two chapters I could already tell that Ellie doesn't care about what's happening at Riverdale as she only wants to go home.

You could possibly make Elli less independent since she always takes orders from her parents but as the story goes along she could finally stand up for herself.

I hope you continue on writing since I love your story!

REVIEW BY: Hoedity