TITLE: False Alarm
LOVE INTEREST: TBD
AUTHOR: Tinkertaydust

GRAMMAR: 5
CHARACTER: 5
OVERALL BOOK: 5

COMMENTS:
Your prologue immediately draws the reader in, leaving them wondering what happened. Also, adding such a complex background makes her so unique compared to other stories I've read– dealing with someone's death (besides Jason's) is such a relatable thing for me :(

I love how the OC doesn't want to originally see her old friends, and how she feels guilty over Archie finding her as well as leaving her sister alone in death :( I love seeing that not everything is perfect and how Jughead is upset of her leaving– excited to see them mend their friendship! Seeing Charlotte struggle with her sister's death and dealing with being back in Riverdale makes her life more interesting and I wondering if she'll eventually break under the pressure! And ahhh seeing Cheryl think Charlotte had something to do with Jason's murder!! Yes please :))

The flow of the story is great from the pre-Jason's death to the first episode. You make sure to add in the personal life and easily transition into the first episode. Your inclusion of her with the others is great and you easily show her friendships with everyone. I'm really excited to see how you continue this story!

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