TITLE: Suspicious
LOVE INTEREST: Undecided
AUTHOR: -yourstrulyraven

GRAMMAR: 5
CHARACTER: 5
OVERALL BOOK: 3.5/4

COMMENTS: You set up Bonnie's relationship with Jughead immediately and I love how he's suspicious of her (wink wink, pun) ! there's isn't much for me to review but you lure the reader in immediately and Jughead hints at the relationship Bonnie had with Jason but you leave it mysterious, making the reader want more which is a good element for a prologue! Bonnie's character is pretty strong right now with her a job, weird relationship with Jug, and her hatred for Jason. Hopefully you expand all of these more :) Can't wait to see what you do !!

tip: never call your stories crappy because they aren't! own them, boo, because it has a great start already <3

REVIEW BY: desolatedarling