TITLE: Mask
LOVE INTEREST: A. Andrews
AUTHOR:  VoidArchie

GRAMMAR: 4
CHARACTER: 5
OVERALL BOOK: 4

COMMENTS:
This was a pretty good book, overall. Some parts of it were really cliché, like Ella moving from New York and knowing Veronica and everything and how she has secrets (but doesn't everyone in Riverdale?) and I also got some gossip girl and pll vibes from the anonymous texts. I typically don't read first person stories anymore, but I think you made it work. I just don't like how you changed the POV a few times, but that's a personal preference. Now, there were parts of your book that gave me a good laugh, and I really liked that since most fics are really serious (including mine, yikes). I adored your plotline for Ella. It was actually really creative and I was actually really interested in it.

Now, the character. I adored Ella's character. I found her to be relatable in some aspects more than other (like her feminism and her bitchiness). I also loved how you casted Josefine Petterson as Ella. I know you wanted to look at character development, but I think it's too soon to tell. Sorry. Now, I know this is an Archie fic and all, but I feel like she moved really really fast with him. Like, I get that he's a fuckboy and you know that typically happens, but he was practically in love with Grundy and didn't even think of Betty or Veronica in the show (well, he did in the first episode).

You had a hell of a lot of chapters for such a small amount of episodes. I liked that. Like honestly, I need to take notes from you. I also noticed like 2 spelling errors, but I think they were just typos. You had a really good book and I enjoyed reading it so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapters!!

REVIEW BY: backflips