TITLE: Wanderlust
LOVE INTEREST: Undecided
AUTHOR: jynerso

COVER: 3
GRAMMAR: 3
CHARACTER: 3
OVERALL BOOK: 3

COMMENTS:
This book is okay, from what's written so far it seems like a lot of other Riverdale books. It has the whole good girl turned bad girl thing. As for your writing, I definitely think you should be a bit more descriptive with some things. You often use the words 'said' and 'told' a lot, so maybe you can try changing those? Instead of 'she told him' you could put 'she replied'.

Onto the OC, I felt like the whole throwing a rock into his car was a bit dramatic and unnecessary? But I'm guessing you were trying to show that she's kind if impulsive. I also wish you gave her like a little bit of a background because she keeps talking about how she changed but never slightly mentions if it was because of something or if she just suddenly woke up like that.

Now you're grammar and punctuation, your punctuation is off in some places and some of your sentences are really short. I don't remember seeing anything misspelt? I do remember some words being missing. For example, I think it was in the second chapter but you wrote "I stand in my as the light of the sun shines in" There are a few other sentences like that as well, you should definitely check those out.

Overall, I think the book definitely has great potential and you are good writer.
REVIEW BY: -yourstrulyraven