TITLE: Afloat
LOVE INTEREST: TBD
AUTHOR: sparkofargent

COVER: 5
GRAMMAR: 4
CHARACTER: 3
OVERALL BOOK: 3

COMMENTS:
Overall this book is actually pretty good. At first, I have to admit, I wasn't that into it. I felt like the writing was a tad bit boring and it was slow. I also felt like the original character's personalities were somewhat exaggerated and they said some things that seemed quite uncharacteristic for them. Another thing I wasn't too fond of was the portrayal of your OC. At first, she had a very Mary Sue like personality and I just wasn't able to connect with her. However, after around the time she started to change (which i have to admit, i felt that process was a tad bit rushed) it started to pick up and I started to really get into it. The book especially got my attention when she burned herself and didn't feel it. I have always, personally, found CIPA interesting. I'm not quite sure if that's the direction you're going in, but if it is I think that's a very original and creative idea so kudos to you for coming up with that.

Now onto your grammar and spelling, I actually didn't find too many mistakes. Your punctuation is pretty spot on, from what I could tell. You did, however, have a few random words in there. I'm assuming that was due to autocorrect? I know editing is a pain in the ass but you might want to check those out.

So overall your book is really good and I will definitely be recommending to friends. Keep up the good work!

P.S. I am in love with your cover! I'm not sure if you made it or someone else but it is seriously gorgeous!
REVIEW BY: -yourstrulyraven