Book name : Our Definition of Love
Author : ishraddha
Mature? : No
Chapters read : 15
Fandom : AnuPre
Genre : Fan Fiction

➶ R E V I E W ➴

➵ First impression : Simple and nice.

➵ Cover : Perfect blending, light colour and cheery. But the fonts made me frown. Change the fonts quickly.

➵ Title : Perfect for the book, waiting to see definitions of love in their version. But you are confused with the title!  Everywhere your title is different, on cover, it is Our Definition Of Love, in title it is Our Definitions Of Love. I suggest you, go with Our Definitions Of Love. Plural form looked more good and apt.

➵ Blurb : Perfect, I don't feel there's something left in the blurb. It's very interesting and catches one's attention quickly.

➵ Flow & pace : A little slow, but as you are setting the story properly, I feel it's okay. But from now onwards don't stretch it too much.

➵ Plot of the book : Looks like a simple and normal love triangle book. You were trying to have some mystery in starting chapters, but it's not evident in the later chapters.

I would suggest these topics to be covered :

Prerna's art exhibition.

Anurag's project for which he came here.

Nandini's dance competition.

And in these things, begin with your actual plot.

➵ Grammar : From chapter 5, there are many grammatical errors. In that chapter (5th), mistakes are on each line.

Leaving space after quotation marks doesn't look that good.

Go for this one : "Hi!"

Instead of : " Hi ! "

In some chapters the alignment is middle, which looks weird as in the other chapters it was left.

Typos were often in every chapters. Names weren't in

➵ Writing Style : First of all, I know you have to add pictures for better imagination for readers. But if you go for details then it would be more professional. Make a grid of all the images you want to use and add it in media box, if you really want to add pics.

➵ Character development : Not completely evident, but yes Nandini is turning into a possessive friend for Anurag. Which is as you plotted, and this was not sudden, it was very slow and I could see in the small things she's possessive for him. Prerna and Anurag - not sure. Work on these two.

➵ Overall impression : Enjoyed the book! Like totally giving Indian book vibes. The starting chapters were little boring as you stretched it, but the later chapters were interesting!

➵ Suggestions :

- Change the fonts in the cover.

- Change the title to Our Definitions Of Love.

- Go for a perfect flow, you are stretching the story.

- Edit the book, work on grammar.

- Instead of pictures, go for your words to describe and make your readers imagine.

- You need to work hard on Anurag and Prerna, as they are also the leads, also - lead couple.

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Published : 06/11/2020