Book name : Our Definition of Love
Author : ishraddha
Mature? : No
Chapters read : 4
Fandom : AnuPre
Genre : Fan Fiction

➶ R E V I E W ➴

➵ First impression : Nice.

➵ Cover : The editing is good, but the font choice isn't pleasing.

➵ Title : I'm confused between "Our Definitions Of Love" or "Our Definition of Love". Nonetheless the title is apt for the book.

➵ Blurb : I loved the blurb, there are very minute punctuation errors that's it!

➵ Flow & pace : Can't comment on this topic now, as there are only 4 chapters. But go for a 'neither too slow nor too fast' pace.

➵ Plot of the book : As there are only 4 chapters, I can't say anything about plot also, but the blurb made it interesting. All the best with the plot, don't make it turn into a clichè.

But the starting chapters were little boring, try adding some interesting things to them.

➵ Grammar : As you have edited the book, there are rarely any grammatical errors. Great job with the editing!

➵ Character development : Again, 4 chapters can't have any character development, ask me for a review when the story gets completed. Just let them (characters) have some flaws and make them realistic.

➵ Overall impression : I feel you have asked for the review very soon, let the story have something in it. It's all just introduction till the 4th chapter. Other than that, I hope the story turn out good.

➵ Suggestions :

- Change the font in the cover.

- Be sure with the title, see whether it should be "Our Definitions Of Love" or "Our Definition Of Love".

- Correct those minute mistakes in the blurb to make it flawless.

- Always do proofreading for the upcoming chapters.

- Let the characters have some 'real' flaws.

- Request for the review when the story gets completed. (XD)

〰️ Thank you for opting my shop for the review. 〰️

Published : 20/10/2020