Book name : Bits Of Yesterday
Author : dishatripathi7
Mature? : No
Chapters read : 5
Fandom : MishBir
Genre : Fanfiction/Romance

R E V I E W

➵ First impression : Loved it!!

➵ Cover : It's just amazing, your GD has done a great job!

➵ Title : I have read many stories on this concept, but your title attracted me the most. It is not only interesting but also tells the concept quickly. But the title in a different font, it doesn't look quite good. I would suggest you to change it back to normal font.

➵ Blurb : The first line itself attracted me, "Falling in love is easy but the gamble starts when it comes to holding upon it", I loved this! But, "6 friends meeting after 10 years, why is that so?" Hmm I didn't got this line properly.

"Are they still friends no, best friends", I guess this sentence needs improvisation. "Apart from distance, together by heart", I liked this line and this describes their friendship. The last two paragraphs need editing, punctuations aren't proper.

Overall, the blurb needs to be little longer, you can also add how the characters are.

➵ Flow & pace : As the story has just started, I can't say about it but try to keep the pace a little slow as these type of stories need more chapters and proper depth.

➵ Plot of the book : I'll be honest, I have seen several books like this, the concept is no new but the way you presented it is the most fascinating thing! Specially those philosophical explainations, the best part! I loved how the characters compared each other with the past ones. Also, the short descriptions about the good old days, amazing!

➵ Grammar : You need to work on this properly, the story is keeping me on hook! But the grammar is little low, punctuations aren't properly placed, sometimes the quotations are in between the thoughts. Several spelling mistakes. So the book needs editing.

➵ Character development : Just 5 chapters, so definitely can't talk on this topic. But I love how every character is given their own space.

➵ Overall impression : The concept is cliché, but not your way of presenting it. I'm loving this book from now only!

➵ Suggestions :

- Change the title to normal font.

- The blurb needs editing.

- Pace to be little slow.

- Work on the grammar.

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