Book name : Getting Her Back
Author : Tanvitango
Mature? : No
Chapters read : 5
Fandom : RonAkshi
Genre : Short Story

R E V I E W

➵ First impression : Absolutely loved it!

➵ Cover : The pictures and colour scheme - perfect. But "Getting Her" isn't getting more focus. When I just glance at your cover, I could only read "Back", one needs to clearly see the cover for reading it whole. So I guess should ask the GD for little changes in texting.

➵ Title : Totally apt for the book!

➵ Blurb : I don't know if it's intentional or not, but in the blurb I felt Sona looked wrong, but in the book it's Rohit who is not right. So maybe you can change it, or let it be the same if it's intentional. Other than that, a few grammatical mistakes to be edited and your blurb is all okay! The last few paragraphs attracted me the most, good job there!

➵ Flow & pace : The flow and pace is going smooth, keep up this flow in the entire story, if possible.

➵ Plot of the book : Absolutely loved it! It's an important topic in today's world! And the best thing about the book is, even though Rohit is wrong, when we see in his point of view, he doesn't feel completely wrong. That's a very big thing! I just felt the prologue can be more detailed, yes it showed how Rohit is, but other than that, something about Sonakshi is also needed. Maybe a scene between Sumit and her which makes Rohit thinks like that...?

➵ Grammar : Not many grammatical mistakes, but yes, tenses are little off at some places. Make sure to edit the whole book after completing.

➵ Character development : Definitely can't say now as it's just five chapters, but I can see there will be. I loved Sonakshi's character the most, like she don't want to give Rohit a second chance for 'breaking her heart' but at that same time she don't want to divorce him either. Rohit, I felt like smacking his face, sorry! But he is slowly realising his mistake and trying to make everything okay. The thing I loved the most in your characters is, they feel real. There are so many people like them! Also, the dialogues are just wow! Absolutely loved them!

➵ Overall impression : The book's plot is based on an important topic, I would recommend this book to each and every female out here on Wattpad! Kudos to the author!

➵ Suggestions :

- Ask for texting redo in the cover from your GD.

- Just ponder over the blurb once.

- Prologue to be more detailed.

- Edit the book.

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