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➴ Review 18 : I Love You ➶

Book name : I Love You
Author : Tanvitango
Mature? : No
Chapters read : 1 (one shot)
Fandom : MishBir
Genre : Fanfiction

R E V I E W

➵ First impression : Cute and sweet!

➵ Cover : The cover is giving lovely vibes, like them in garden, the editing was good but the fonts ruined it! I would suggest changing the fonts. Other than that, we can picture MishBir in the garden.

➵ Title : The title, no wonder, suits your story, but it is very common and doesn't attract people's attention. I would advice to change the title. Also the ♡ at the starting and end was necessary?

➵ Blurb : The blurb was short and crisp, and okay for one shot, but there are grammatical mistakes in it. Other than that, the blurb doesn't need any changes.

➵ Flow & pace : As it's an one shot, I felt the flow and pace perfect! Neither you stretched it much, nor you took it very fast! Just perfect!

➵ Plot of the book : I just loved the plot! How you explained Mishti's emotions was just perfect! Even in her POV, I felt Abir's emotions too, and that's a very good thing that you have aced with both the characters so well!

➵ Grammar : Though I don't like when pictures are used in stories, but yours is an exception as you had to show sketches.

There were many grammar mistakes, plus at some places the quotation marks weren't closed properly. So do edit once.

➵ Character development : *As it's just one shot, character development can't take place*.

➵ Overall impression : This was a short and cute OS! Though some more emotions could have been added, but this was no less! It was a good read!

➵ Suggestions :

- Change the fonts in the cover.

- Title to be change.

- Edit the grammar mistakes in blurb and shot.

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