Book name : Mister Wife
Author : KristinAnne11
Mature? : No
Chapters read : 6
Fandom : KaIra
Genre : General Fiction

➴ R E V I E W ➶

➵ First impression : Nice.

➵ Cover : Loved the cover! Your graphic designer has done a good job!

➵ Title : Mister Wife - it's attractive. But why with different fonts? If you say it's for making it look beautiful then I would like to say :

No one sees which fonts you use for your title but the content of your book.

➵ Blurb : Again in the first line itself you used a font for it which was not at all needed.

Other than that I can already make a guess about how the female lead is. It was good but could have been more interesting as I didn't got that 'It's a worth reading book' feeling. And there are grammatical errors in the blurb. Correct them soon.

➵ Flow & pace : I can't say about it clearly as the story has just started but it's a little quick, I'm not getting to know the characters much. 

➵ Plot of the book : It's interesting, a girl who don't want to get married (same like me!!!), I would love to know what happens at last with her. Will she change her thinking and get settled with Kabir? Or Kabir will adjust to her ideology? It's very intriguing!

➵ Grammar : There were grammatical errors in both Hindi and English. I saw you don't leave space after a sentence, girl that's basic grammar! Do leave a space after every full stop.

➵ Character development : As the story has started so of course there can't be any. But I'm damn sure there will be, seeing Kiara's thoughts on marriage. But try to show Kabir a little more.

➵ Overall impression : Try to make the chapters more interesting, you have plotted an interesting character - Kiara, don't make the chapters dull and boring. Show the readers how she is, her bonding with everyone and go with your plot.

➵ Suggestions :

- Change the fonts to normal one in the title.

- A little change in blurb is needed, try to show little more about the characters.

- Make the flow little slow and let the characters develop.

- Pay attention to your grammar, do proof-reading.

- Give Kabir some more space as he also an important character.

- Make the chapters little interesting so they get hooked to the book with every passing chapter.