Book name : Because Destiny Has Its Own Plans
Author : RekhaMittal
Mature? : Yes
Chapters read : 56
Fandom : AnuPre
Genre : Fanfiction

➶ R E V I E W ➴

➵ First impression : Continuation from the serial, interesting.

➵ Cover : It's looking nice, but could have been more better. Like AnuPre separation looks, or something more good?

➵ Title : Perfect for the book. But can it be in normal sentence case? Why everything in uppercase? And remove the emoji from last, then it's perfect.

➵ Blurb : The blurb just had my heart!! But can't be in normal font? It was difficult to read.

➵ Flow & pace : The flow is perfect and this slow pace is much needed as it's 8 long years since they separated.

➵ Plot of the book : I'm on short of words to explain how much I loved the Plot! That emotional turmoil of Prerna, all that disheartening things that happened and turned her like that. It's just perfect!

➵ Grammar : In the starting chapters, there were no quotations. I was figuring whether it were dialogues or thoughts. Don't use emojis. Change the style of delivering dialouges.

Instead of writing like :

Prerna (shockingly) : How do you know ?

Go for :

"How do you know?" Prerna asked, startled.

You add pictures at some points for better imagination, trust me, your words are enough for everyone to imagine. So refrain from adding images as that becomes unprofessional.

In starting chapters, you have written nearly everything in just one paragraph. Make small paragraphs, as one paragraph becomes eye straining.

A small but important tip :

Don't write like this :

Tumhara bharosa toda , dil toda !

Go for this one :

Tumhara bharosa toda, dil toda!

Small but looks very professional. There are minor grammatical errors, book need editing.

➵ Character development : It's so smooth! Their dialogues, emotional turmoil, thoughts, everything is just perfect! You have aced with every character perfectly!

➵ Overall impression : It's a must read book on AnuPre. That quotes in the beginning and songs in the media box are a treat! What I love most about the book is - the dialogues. They are thought well and have many emotions hidden in them. One can literally cry reading the book and in the next chapter they would laugh their heart out.

➵ Suggestions :

- Ask for a cover redo from your graphic designer.

- Remove the emoji from the title and write the title in normal sentence case.

- Change the fonts of the blurb to normal one.

- Don't change your flow and pace for some readers who are asking for quick happy ending.

- Change the style of delivering dialouges, from script style to quotations.

- Make paragraphs, it was very difficult to read from only one paragraph.

- Pay special attention to "Grammar" part of the review.

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Published on 11/08/2020.