Love, Dauntless
Book: Love, Dauntless
Author: DauntlessShadowIce1
Genre: Poetry
Cover, Title & Description:
A better base image could be chosen for the cover. We can't deny the fact that cover is the first thing we look at when it comes to choosing a book, so, I would suggest you to go for a catchy (not necessarily flashy) image that fits well with the theme of the book and brings you more readers that you rightly deserve.
The title goes pretty well with the book considering the fact that the poems are your way of expressing your thoughts and emotions.
I would suggest you to give some time to develop a good description for the book.
Writing Style, Flow & Creativity:
Simple, short and straightforward way of writing. You just let your thoughts and emotions do the work for you. And, they've helped you weave amazing poetry. Great job!
The flow of the poems is not interrupted abruptly even once. It's smooth and easy going. This is something that helps the reader understand the depth of the poems.
You have your unique ways to make each poem different from another. You're doing a great job. Keep exploring!
Emotions:
Most of the poetry is primarily dark. While it's amazing to write on such issues, I would love it to see you explore the lighter side of the world too. I'm sorry if it's not your style, it's just a suggestion.
Literary Devices & Descriptive Tools:
You've used fine imageries and literary devices in the book. Feels great to read such amazingly drafted poetry! Great job.
Grammar & Vocabulary:
The very idea of keeping it simple to ensure that the emotions are conveyed to the readers is praiseworthy. You've used right words at right places. Amazing!
Also, there were hardly any noticeable grammatical errors. Again, keep up the good work!
Overall, it's a wonderful read. Would love to read some more poems!
I apologize if I have offended or hurt you. I hope you take this review in a positive way.
Keep writing!
Lots of love!
Stay safe and be happy!
Rating: 4
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