Erratic Art
Book: Erratic Art
Author: scrabblepost
Genre: Poetry
Cover, Title & Description:
The cover could be a little better. The base picture looks good. However, you could choose a tad bit darker shade of grey to use for the text. Also, the font size of the quote is too small that it gets difficult to read, so if suggest you to increase that a little too.
The title is apt for a poetry book. Good job with that. Also, the titles of individual poems too are chosen wisely. Kudos to you!
The description (I'm talking about the Author's Note at the beginning of the book) sums up your journey of becoming a poet. That helps the readers to connect on a personal level. Good job there. However, I would suggest you to move that to the description of the book because it'll help the readers in making the decision of whether to give the book a chance or not.
Writing Style, Flow & Creativity:
You choose to write simple yet meaningful verses and that does the job of helping the readers to easily relate. Short and simple but your poems convey the message. Great job!
Not once did I feel that the flow of the poem was distracted, you decide a theme and you stick to it until the end. That's a great thing.
With all those thoughts flowing in your mind, you've managed to put out your best creative foot forward and it surely is the best.
Emotions:
Your poems manage to evoke the emotions in the readers that you've conveyed in them. Be it making the reader feel beautiful despite their flaws or making them feel the emotions of facing a demon's child. And, the variety of emotions in the different poems just portray how much of a versatile poet you are. Great job!
Literary Devices & Descriptive Tools:
You master the art of using the right metaphors! Just the right ones at the right place. Beautiful! I could visualize the scenes portrayed in the poems playing out in my mind. Doing that through poetry is a tough job but you've done it!
Grammar & Vocabulary:
I love the way you've used the words in your poems. Neither too complex nor too simple. Just the right ones to make the reader feel the poetry.
Also, there were hardly any noticeable grammatical errors. Good job again!
Overall, your poetry deserves much more recognition!
I apologize if I have offended or hurt you. I hope you take this review in a positive way.
Keep writing!
Lots of love!
Stay safe and be happy!
Rating: 4
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