Title: Street Girl
Author: solacing
Genre: Teen Fiction
Summary: n/a
Status: Ongoing

***I only read your first chapter***

First impression 8/10 - Your cover is beautiful, but I feel like it doesn't really show what your summary says if that makes sense. Your summary is good too, but it didn't really catch my attention.

Plot 9/10 - It's definitely unique and original. I haven't gotten very far yet, but so far it's wonderful.

Dialogue 1o/10 - I didn't see any errors in your dialogue and it flowed smoothly so you get a 10, yay!

Grammar 10/10 - Like dialogue, I didn't see any grammatical errors, and if there were any, they were so small I didn't even notice.

Characters 10/10 - I love them! The way you show all of their thoughts and feelings is wonderful. You sparked my interest in them, I want to know more.

Overall 9.4/10 - I love the chapter banners at the beginning! It adds such a cute little touch to your chapters. The only thing I didn't like was your cover and summary, but that's a matter of opinion, so I don't think you have to change anything. Your book is amazing!