Author: AngelTweet

The Review

Cover, Title and Description
Firstly, the cover looks good although the quote is not visible, it would have been better off without it or maybe you could have enlarged the quote. The font used for the title is okay, I would suggest to enlarge it a bit too.

The title is alright. Nothing much to say about it.

The description is a turn off to be honest. There are grammatical errors in the description, in which tense have you written the description? Is it the past tense or the present? Frankly, it looks like a mixture of both which makes it tough for the readers out of your fandom to understand.

"What if Sanskaar has married the love of his life?"

What does this mean actually?

"Why Swara is confused about her marriage with Laksh?"

It should have been, "Why is Swara confused about her marriage with Laksh?"

First Chapter
"Why this is bothering her?" The chapter name is faulty, it should be "Why is this bothering her?". The chapter was smooth, easy flowing and all. I wish you would have defined the relationships in a better way. As I am not from the SwaSan fandom it was a tad bit tough for me. Other than that, the first chapter was good.

Character Development
Character development has been showed beautifully. I read 5 chapters and I could understand the happenings of their lives. I could understand Sanskar's feeling as well as Swara's feelings and Ragini's feelings too. A really great job done.

Storyline and Plot
Storyline is nice. It's a continuation from the serial so it's a bit tough for me to understand what was their past but the plot you took up looked interesting.

Grammar and Detailing
Grammar is good as well and your word selection is also nice. The only problem is tense. Sometimes you write in present tense and then switch to past tense. Whilst writing a story, you should always write it in past tense, not present tense. There are some minor typos too.

Detailing was at par. A fair description of the leads was provided. You could write a bit about Laksh too, how he looked, why did Swara not like him and all of that.

Overall Rating
3