Author: Its-priyaanka

The Review

Cover, Title and Description

The cover is alright, I don't like it that much. I know it's kinda fits the story with all the flames. But I don't like the fonts. 'World' is not clearly visible, it is getting mixed with the flames. Your username is a bit too big, almost reaching Nandini's eyes.

Title is apt with the storyline, I can't think of any other better title.

The description is alluring. Really well constructed. Short but eye-catching, I really liked it.

First Chapter

Frankly, it was really good. Nandini's side was clear as well as left in suspense that what so bad happened with her that she became hell bent on seeking revenge from Manik. Who was the person she was crying for? I loved it to the core.

On the other hand, Manik came out to be a good boy with his little dream of his dreamgirl. His explanation was too real.

I liked the way you provided a complete family background to all the characters in the first chapter which left no room for confusion.

Character Development

The characters are developing in their own pace, Nandini is on a voyage of seeking revenge till the first five chapters and Fab 5 doing what they do best- ragging. Addition of Navya and Abhimanyu in the group was a good idea and the entry of Harshad so early was nice too. The best part is that Harshad doesn't look like a villain already unlike a lot of other stories.

Plot and Storyline

Plot development is slow but steady. I didn't find any plot holes for the time being and by the way you write, I don't think I will find any too.

Storyline is new, refreshing for a change. I liked how you reversed the roles, usually Manik is the one with a fierce attitude seeking revenge and all, but seeing Nandini to be the fiery one over here felt like a breather.

Grammar and Detailing

Grammar is remarkable. Vocabulary is really fine. I found some minor typos and some mistakes in the article bit.

Detailing has been done exceptionally well. I have nothing to say here, you nailed it.

Overall Rating

5