Author: @Jade_S4M

The Review

Cover, Title and Description

Cover is alright, plain and simple. Not that impressive but gives a feel of the bands' life, chaotic. Also, I don't like the quote you used, the word 'Stars' is two times in it, which I don't know, just sounds weird when I say it in my head.

Title is nice, but in the first five chapters, not that relevant. Maybe I'll get to know in the upcoming chapters.

Description, I have to admit is really nice. The first dialogue only is so eye-catching. That sarcastic remark! I loved it. A small peep into the story was good too. The quote you used in the end was deep!

First Chapter

It was really funny. The dog-cat chase, Somin saving her number which is not actually her number in Sehun's phone. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the chapter. Although, it was a bit tough for me to remember the names 'cause I have never read any Kpop fan fiction. Like ever. This was the first one and trust me, I don't regret a bit. Oh and yes, back of the head, I cracked man. I was laughing so hard!

Character Development

The characters were super cool. Especially Somin and Rio. Somin is such a badass! The whole Aurora has a charm of it's own. Everybody is different from each other, yet together. Sehun did try to make a move but Somin being Somin, had to blast. I even like that guy, sorry if I spell it wrong, Eunwoo, he was so caring. Somin's parents are on another level only. I still am a bit confused about Sohee's part.

Storyline and Plot

Storyline, in one word is- fabulous. You have chosen such a cute yet badass storyline.

Plot flow is too good to be judged. You know the number of times you showed Sehun and Somin bumping into each other, any other day it would have looked like a total cliche story that from nowhere the leads are meeting each other again and again. But in this, you gave a proper backstory to each and every meet.
No plot holes till now too.

Grammar and Detailing

Grammar is phenomenal with very very minor spelling errors in some of the chapters. Your choice of words, your everything is just too good. The long chapters were not boring at all, in fact they were so humorous. I laughed like anything.

Detailing was out of the world. Really well done. The emotions, dresses, setting, looks, everything was perfectly described.

Overall Rating

5.5

Congratulations, buddy.