Author: CristinaMiru1

The Review

Cover, Title and Description

So I liked the cover, the comic type cover is really cool.

Title is relatable with the story provided that Draco has been erased from Hermione's memory.

Description is rightly constructed as well!

First Chapter

Alright, so I liked the chapter and the way you described how Draco landed here. I loved the glimpse of Hermione in the chapter and also Draco's unintentional praises for her. The only thing was that it was not captivating enough for me to move on to the next chapter.

Character Development

I can see the characters evolving over the chapters, especially Draco. Supporting characters have been portrayed really well.

Plot and Storyline

The plot development is as smooth as a knife through butter. I didn't notice any plot holes till now.

Storyline is damn interesting, Hermione not remembering Draco was a shocker. And Draco being the one who did that was an even bigger shocker!

Grammar and Detailing

Grammar is top-notch. I didn't find any mistakes till the 5th chapter. You vocabulary is superb. Your tense, punctuations, dialogue delivery, everything is on point.

This was where I was really impressed. You detailed the looks of the leads along with the supporting characters which not much people do in fan fictions.

Overall Rating

5