Author: Onyeneke-Greg

The Review

First up, the cover. It is average, could be better. You tried to keep it basic but it is just too plain. It won't attract readers at all. Spongebob is doing stand-up maybe which is cool but you could have incorporated that image in a better and funnier cover. The fonts are shifted too much to the left and the colour of it almost makes it invisible. There are a lot of cover shops in Wattpad, you can easily get one impeccable cover for your book.

The title is somewhat good and funny. It's a book mainly for jokes so this title will do for me.

The blurb is of just one sentence. Can't really judge it. But I understand it's not a story then what could you have written other than that. This is where your creativity comes in. Maybe you could have written a small jest just to give a peek of what kind of jokes you gonna post.

I liked the opening joke but honestly, it's really common nowadays. But I smiled, so that's what counts.

The grammar and vocabulary was just at par. There were some missing articles, some typos, nothing a proof read can't fix. But I'll have to be very honest with you, your jokes are not very appealing. I felt like I was just reading through some normal book. Sometimes I wasn't able to connect 'cause I am not from Nigeria.

I believe you can do a lot better with the cover, title, description, and most importantly, the quality of your jokes. Make it humorous with colourful banners, cool fonts, etc. Write more original jokes and just don't stop from pushing yourself.

Overall Rating

2