Author: Charmedone22

The Review

Cover, Title and Description
Cover looks good with the icy background with the leads' pictures. Prerna's picture between MaNan looks good, Manik's picture has been edited nicely too but Nandini's picture is a bit distorted. I like the fonts for the title too.

The title seems apt, although I think you could have kept it as 'My Queen' because by far everytime Nandini's been mentioned as a queen, it has been in Manik's POV (till chapter 5).

The description's satisfactory, it has way too many questions in my opinion. It confused me more than it attracted me. Too much chaos going on in that description. There were some grammatical errors in the description too. A little less unnecessary questions like Manik's siblings part would make it better.

First Chapter

It was a normal chapter, nothing eye-catching. You showed MaNan's first meet and well that was pretty much about it.

Character Development

The characters' development is abrupt in the first five chapters. Like you didn't elaborate on MaNan's first kiss which is humongous. Fans wait for their first kiss and you just surpassed that. Besides that, you didn't show how MaNan fell in love, I guess it will all be revealed in the further chapters.

Plot and Storyline
Plot development is quite smooth till the 5th chapter, especially Prerna's revealation.

Storyline seems unique and out of the box, I honestly haven't read something like this before.

Grammar and Detailing
You jump from present tense to past tense, please try not to write in present tense. That's not how stories are to be written. The inner thoughts that you write in bold should actually be written in italics. Some minor typing mistakes is also there.

Frankly, there were very less details, be it about the leads or the set up. You could have done much better than that but I guess you focused more on the romance and Prerna's revealation bit.

Overall Rating
3