Author: @vidhyascribbles

The Review

Cover, Title and Description

The cover is alright, the font selection is good but I think you could have used Devsena's picture too in the cover.

The title is pretty apt.

The description has been carved beautifully. Attracts the attention of people.

First Chapter

The first chapter is short yet intriguing. I understood that their kid was alive and was taken away by Sanga. The representation has been done really well.

Character Development

Not much in the first few chapters, the chapters being short is one of the reasons. Bhalla fleeing is the only interesting thing.

Storyline and Plot

I haven't read much historical stories, but I think taking into consideration that what if Kattapa hadn't killed Amrendra? That's nice.

Plot flow and development in happening in a steady pace with calculated chapters.

Grammar and Detailing

Grammar is fantastic, couldn't find a single mistake. Choice of words and putting them into sentences has been done gracefully.

Detailing of somebody's thoughts is better than the people's looks.

Overall Rating

4