Author: OnyenankeyaEkene

The Review

The cover is okayish. Not that appealing but works for me. The emoji selection is good and I liked the little quote you added at the top. The best thing about your cover is that it is all very clear. The fonts and the colours for used makes it all pretty visible. Your username was also present which I like.

Then the title, it's actually pretty fun. Yeah, it sounded like a challenge at first which immediately drew me in. I really really liked it. However, I don't think the laughing emoji is needed there in the title.

The blurb is very well constructed, actually. Though not a proper story, you very successfully created that curiosity in the readers' mind with your challenging words. I loved how you introduced Akpos and also mentioned why he came to be know as Akpos Kekere in the first place. Really well done.

I liked the opening chapter very much. Although it had minor mistakes, it was enjoyable. The jokes were nice and managed to make me smile. Although it was very much Nigeria oriented, I could understand because you detailed why the electricity joke was funny. Otherwise I wouldn't have understood it.

Vocabulary is nice but there is some tense shift problem. There were spelling mistakes like first you wrote 'Yassi' but just in the next sentence 'Yessi'. Also you should write smaller paragraphs, it kind of helps people to comment more. And you don't have to write everything in bold letters. Other than three small errors, I really enjoyed the witty answers Akpos gave. Just awesome!

Overall Rating

4