Author: mann101978

The Review

Cover, Title and Description
Cover could have been better. It's not very clear and we can only see Draco distinctly. The fonts are not that good either.

I feel the title could have been better too. Instead of 'Another Chance' you could have kept it 'Mystery of Hogwarts'. This title feels like it's only about Draco getting a second chance whereas the blurb says a lot more than just Draco.

The description is nice. Gives a clear idea of the story.

First Chapter
The first chapter was a bit short, to be honest. But the conversation between Dramione was nicely written and you showed the flashback pretty well.
It was not a long one so I don't really have much to say.

Character Development
I like the character development bit. Hermione's views were clear as well as Harry's. I could relate to Ron too because trusting a guy after all the things he did is not that easy. Draco seems to be guilty of his deeds and his liking towards Hermione becomes evident over the chapters.

Plot and Storyline
I haven't read much but the plot development seems to be smooth till now. I like how you introduced a new character called Andrew Mayfair. That was a smart move.

Storyline seems interesting not because of the initial chapters but of the blurb which says there's a lot to unfold.

Grammar and Detailing
Your grammar is exceptionally good with minor typos here and there. I didn't really find any grammatical errors in the 4 chapters I read.

I feel you could have worked a bit more on the detailing of the setting, of Hogwarts and even of the leads. Otherwise it's great.

Overall Rating
4