Author: radhika_20

The Review

Cover, Title and Description

Cover is not that good, but not bad either. You could have chosen better pictures and background. The fonts were good though.

The title you have chosen is not unique. I haven't read many chapters so I can't comment on how 'epic' MaNan's journey in your story is.

Description, well there was no description. I have said this, and will say it again, I know in fan fiction books people come to read your story because of the lead couple but you could have written something in the description. Perhaps, the character sketch only.

First Chapter

The first chapter was not enthralling, it showed the lifestyle of the Murthy's. Usually, in long stories like yours, first chapters are like this only. I can't expect you to write something very interesting in the first chapter itself and stretch it till the 40th chapter. But because I have to judge the book based on the first five chapters, I don't find it interesting enough.

Character Development

Again, it's tough to judge characters so fast in long stories. Your chapters are really short so there's not much character development in the first 5 chapters. That's all I can say.

Plot and Storyline

Okay so the flow of plot is nice, your short chapters compelled me to read the further chapters.

Storyline seems cute, nothing much till now other than MaNan's first meet. Let's see how epic their saga turns out to be.

Grammar and Detailing

Grammar is a major problem. There are spelling mistakes, abbreviations, emojis, a lot of ellipses. I suggest not to use these.

Well, in the case of detailing, what can I say? You showed everything by pictures only. Please use words more than pictures.

Overall Rating

2