Title: Who's she

Genre: One Shot

Author: SAANVI005

Judge: SaachiDudani

Cover/Title: I absolutely love the cover. It's simple, basic and on point. The title however, I feel can be better. It might be relatable to the story but you can get more linguistic with it. It would be a 1.6/2 for me.

Description: Short and sweet. Hah! I really like the team names. You decided to keep it basic and that's great. Credits is a personal thing so I would not deduct points for not mentioning it. It would be a 1/1 for me.

Storyline: Eyy!!! I wanted to read more about it. Shit! You just ended it girl. It's such a cute little one shot that I absolutely love!!! The words, the pace and the newness, everything was on point. Hats off to you for writing this. It would be a 1.9/2 for me.

Total: 4.5/5

Book star: 5

Wish you luck, love and peace.