Book : The universe of four Gods

   Written by _sagigirl_

Reviewed by Pournu

Genre: Fanfiction

Book stars:  5/5.

Ratings: 5/5

Title Cover and Description:

Good job on the title. It somehow hints towards fantasy and we all love fantasy books as it gives us a solace that the real world fails to give. A unique description I must say. Made me curious and I am definitely jumping in to the story. Good job on getting our attention. Cover is nice. But doesn't give us any hint about the story though. You could improve your cover a bit maybe because the author name wasn't clear. But overall a great job. Keep it up.

First chapter:

Again you took me by surprise. The way you narrated the dream I thought it was real. And then there comes the epic twist. I was laughing so hard. Yet again Kudos to you for the humour you brought in and the best friend being Aliya was yet another twist I didn't expect. Good one though. Poor Nandhini that's the plight of most of the students who are facing board exam. And the way you described the beginning of their friendship was a bit short. But I have to give it to you for the humour and that narration man awesome ❤️. So yet again you hit a sixer with your first chapter.

Plot and story line:

You keep us hooked up to your story and with each chapter you are making us bite our nails as to what is going to happen next ? Good storyline wonderful plot can't wait to find out how adventurous this journey is gonna be. Yet another feather in your cap for that plot. I am tired of saying good job. I will think something similar for you next time.

Characters:

Though there were not much characters still it was interesting to see what happens next. With only four characters so far you managed to make it so adventurous and I felt I am there traveling alongside Nandhini and being the part of adventure. So far the characters are portrayed perfectly.

Grammar and Detailing:

You need to work on your grammar and vocabulary dear. They make sure your readers have a pleasant reading experience. Also try giving English translation wherever Hindi dialogues are used.  Your story needs a bit of detailing too. Do give a proof read once to avoid typos.

My view as a reader:

Firstly thank you for making Aliya a positive character. Nandhini's bond with her makes me remember my best friend and I could connect with her easily.  Then the curious Nandhini is a treat to watch. Her rants and complaints to her Aiyyappa makes me smile and her innocence was portrayed well. I am very much excited to see what happens next.

Conclusion:

A tale of two friends stuck in a different realm and then one of the two is back to present. It's a beautiful addition to my library. Well done dearie. Keep it up.