Title:  The Game of Destiny.

            Genre: Historical Fiction

            Written By: Adheeshree.

            Reviewed by: Pournu.

           Rating:  4 /5
        
           Book star: 4

Cover , Title and Description:

 A cryptic title I would say. A brief description which goes well with your title and the last line of description adds to the title. Lets see what  destiny holds for them.

First Chapter:

Dear you know how to touch the right chords because at the end of first chapter I ended up shedding tears along with the King . His anguish is visible along with anger and helplessness. Whom should I feel sorry for? the helpless father or  a sincere king who is ready to protect his country but at what cost ? or the eldest princess who is ready to sacrifice her life for her father or the second eldest princess who is also being dragged along with her sister in this mess? Personally I would do the same for my dad as any daughter would but that doesn't make it right.  You did a fabulous job by bringing emotional connect with readers in your  first chapter. Kudos to you for that. There are many Hyat even today but its just the circumstances are different.

Character Development:

A lovely father and understanding daughter but more than that I see a father who respects his daughter's decision and not trying to impose his decision on them. then comes the eldest daughter who is more matured due to the circumstances. Putting her family before her and ready to do anything for them. A second mother to her siblings  There is also this arrongant prince and his brother. If you want her doesn't mean you deserve her. I loved how Hyat holds her ground in maximum possible places.  The thought process of queen is disgusting and hope she changes her mind soon. Not everyone is here to bewitch the king . It should be her son she should have a conversation with. The sibling bond of both brothers as well as sisters are ❤️. They care for each other than themselves. Hopefully there will be a positive change in their life.

Plot and story line:

The plot is quite similar but you make up for it with your writing style and story line.  I like the way you portray Hyat. Humble yet honest , Mature but with a back bone. I would say a lovely story and good story line.

Grammar and Detailing:

It's easy to read as there are no complex words. There is no grammatical errors and any typos. Keep going.

My view as a reader:

As a reader I felt every emotions you portrayed in the story.  It gave an emotional connect as soon as I finished the first chapter. Even after such a big change she didn't give up on  standing up for herself. That fierce nature of herself 😍 is nice. But her emotional breakdown and the fact that she gave in  to the king bothers me a bit but overall lovely 😍 story . Keep writing more I am excited to see their journey.